[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 85/225] help: review pref-title.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 1e8b0aab0f7d34748e6c6f4b265887eb631cb6bd
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 16 22:29:11 2013 +0000

    help: review pref-title.page

 help/C/pref-title.page |   17 +++++++++++++----
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-title.page b/help/C/pref-title.page
index 9cff0bf..b0b6086 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-title.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-title.page
@@ -12,13 +12,20 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <desc>Allow commands to set <app>Terminal</app> title</desc>
+    <desc>Allow commands to set the title in <app>Terminal</app>.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
-  <title><app>Terminal</app> titles</title>
+  <title><app>Terminal</app> title</title>
 
-  <p><app>Terminal</app> allows commands to set the name of your <app>Terminal</app> tab. Go to <guiseq><gui 
style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui><gui style="tab">Title and 
Command</gui></guiseq> and you can choose from the following options...</p>
+  <p><app>Terminal</app> can allow commands to set the name of your
+  <app>Terminal</app> tab.</p>
+
+  <!-- Give in structions in a steps list:
+
+  Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
+  style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui><gui style="tab">Title and
+  Command</gui></guiseq> and you can choose from the following options...</p>
 
   <terms>
     <item>
@@ -37,6 +44,8 @@
       <title>Keep initial title</title>
       <p>Commands executed in <app>Terminal</app> may replace the intial title, choose this option to retain 
the existing <app>Terminal</app> title.</p>
     </item>
-  </terms>
+  </terms> -->
+
+<!-- Talk about the 'Initial title' here -->
 
 </page>