[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 182/252] Head: review app-zoom, clarify pref-title

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 1c5a1f2beff55b0c242e7f785089f6bf5cd81680
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 09:02:45 2013 -0500

    Head: review app-zoom, clarify pref-title

 help/C/app-zoom.page   |    9 +++++++--
 help/C/pref-title.page |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-zoom.page b/help/C/app-zoom.page
index 9d2281f..3252b0f 100644
--- a/help/C/app-zoom.page
+++ b/help/C/app-zoom.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="zoom-inout">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-24" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-24" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
 
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>To decrease <app>Terminal</app> font size:</p>
+  <p>To decrease <app>Terminal</app> text size:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/pref-title.page b/help/C/pref-title.page
index 2939d64..da22623 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-title.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-title.page
@@ -53,13 +53,13 @@
         </item>
         <item>
           <title><gui>Append initial title</gui></title>
-          <p>The title will consist of the title set by the currently executing
-          command, followed by the initial title.</p>
+          <p>The new title will consist of the title set by the currently
+          executing command, followed by the initial title.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title><gui>Prepend initial title</gui></title>
-          <p>The title will consist of the initial title followed by the title
-          set by the currently executing command.</p>
+          <p>The new title will consist of the initial title followed by the
+          title set by the currently executing command.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title><gui>Keep initial title</gui></title>