[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 185/251] Help: review app-cursor

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 7eb175610082b196475cdb1045a5fc02162d96df
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 09:59:55 2013 -0500

    Help: review app-cursor

 help/C/app-cursor.page |   15 +++++++++------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-cursor.page b/help/C/app-cursor.page
index acc3c49..64cf31d 100644
--- a/help/C/app-cursor.page
+++ b/help/C/app-cursor.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="app-cursor">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
 
@@ -23,8 +28,8 @@
 
   <title>Change cursor</title>
 
-  <p>There are three cursors available in <app>Terminal</app> for you to chose
-  from. To select your preferred cursor type:</p>
+  <p><app>Terminal</app> has three cursors from which to choose. To select your
+  preferred cursor:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -34,7 +39,7 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Choose your desired cursor shape from the drop down list next to
-      <gui>Cursor shape</gui>, you can choose from the following options:</p>
+      <gui>Cursor shape</gui>. You can choose from the following options:</p>
       <terms>
         <item>
           <title>|</title>
@@ -49,8 +54,6 @@
           <p><gui>Underline</gui></p>
         </item>
       </terms>
-    </item>
-    <item>
       <p>Upon selection of the cursor, your choice is saved automatically.</p>
     </item>
     <item>