[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 93/289] help: review app-fullscreen.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit b979a4aee96ea4ce41808bdc0d29d6b4be26b514
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Feb 14 23:18:21 2013 +0000

    help: review app-fullscreen.page

 help/C/app-fullscreen.page |   19 +++++++++++++++----
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-fullscreen.page b/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
index 7433e57..787b09f 100644
--- a/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
+++ b/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
@@ -5,23 +5,34 @@
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-11" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
+
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Enable fullscreen mode</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Fullscreen session</title>
 
+<!-- Explain what fullscreen mode is first, then say how to use it. Use <steps>
+     list. -->
+
   <p>To hide <app>Terminal</app> window borders and enable the
-  <gui>Fullscreen</gui> mode, go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui><gui
-  style="menuitem">Fullscreen</gui></guiseq> or Press
+  fullscreen mode, go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
+  <gui style="menuitem">Full Screen</gui></guiseq> or press
   <keyseq><key>F11</key></keyseq>.</p>
 
-  <note style="tip"><p>If you have more than one <app>Terminal</app> tab open,
-  the tab bar will be visible in the <gui>Fullscreen</gui> mode.</p></note>
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>If you have more than one <app>Terminal</app> tab open, the tab bar will
+    be visible in the fullscreen mode.</p>
+  </note>
   
 </page>