[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 226/276] Help: Modified help on app-terminal-sizes.page.



commit 7a3692d4aab26b082b9f663c11255ed1e2fd43bb
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 00:19:22 2013 +0530

    Help: Modified help on app-terminal-sizes.page.
    
    Reworded help as instructed in previous review.
    Added new introductory explanation to when changing
    Terminal sizes would be useful.
    Made necessary mallard tag changes as asked in review.

 help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page |   50 +++++++++++++--------------------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
index 4f627e8..4bedbee 100644
--- a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
+++ b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
@@ -24,23 +24,17 @@
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
 
-  <!-- Reword the introductory sentence as it makes less sense now that stuff
-  is in different order on the page. -->
-  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the
-  following presets:</p>
+  <p>You may require <app>Terminal</app> windows to be of a particular size when you work with certain 
command line applications that have minimum terminal size requirements in order to display correctly or if 
you want to view long lines of terminal output with minimal line breaks on your display.</p>
+
+  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the following presets:</p>
   
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <!-- In what sizes? Reword. Note that 'To do *something* should normally
-      be before the start of the steps. Full stop is missing at the end of this
-      item. -->
-      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in these sizes, go to
-      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq></p>
+      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in preset sizes, go to
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <!-- If you are listing something and the previous sentence tells the
-      user what the list is, you should normally end it with a colon. -->
-      <p>Choose from the options given in the menu.</p>
+      <p>You can choose from the options:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
           <p><gui>80×24</gui></p>
@@ -59,37 +53,27 @@
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <!-- Reflow. Your keyseq does not work in one combination. Make sure that
-    you use × instead of x. -->
     <p>If you have enabled <link xref="pref-keyboard-access"><gui>Menu access keys</gui></link>, you can 
access this
-    menu by pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key><key>1</key></keyseq> to
-    open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80x24</gui> and so on.</p>
+    menu by pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and then press <key>1</key> to
+    open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80×24</gui> and so on.</p>
   </note>
 
-  <!-- Reflow properly: the second line should start at the same indenting as
-  the paragraph tag. Is this in addition to the above? Or alternatively? Make
-  this explicit. -->
-  <p>You can alter <app>Terminal</app> sizes according to your
-     requirements:</p>
+  <p>If you require custom size <app>Terminal</app> windows, you can also alter sizes according to your 
requirements:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <!-- Indent properly. Be precise when you copy UI strings. -->
-       <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-     style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui><gui
-     style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Profile
+      Preferences…</gui><gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
-      <!-- Indent properly, reflow. -->
-    <p>Select <gui>Use custom default terminal
-     size</gui>.</p>
+    <p>Select <gui>Use custom default terminal size</gui>.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
-      <!-- The faster way to do this is to just type in the number of columns
-      or rows manually. -->
-    <p>You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by
-     clicking on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase size and <gui
-     style="button">-</gui> to decrease.</p>
+     <p>You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by typing the
+     desired number of columns and rows in the input boxes next to <gui>Default
+     size:</gui> for <gui>columns</gui> and <gui>rows</gui>. You can also click
+     on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase and/or <gui
+     style="button">-</gui> to decrease the size.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 


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