[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 144/302] Help: Modified help on app-terminal-sizes.page.



commit 6e90a7791bf8ce12883a2b8bbd0266a71fa681ae
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Sun Feb 17 12:00:22 2013 +0530

    Help: Modified help on app-terminal-sizes.page.
    
    Added steps tag wherever necessary.
    Other changes to page structure.

 help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page |   42 ++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
index 5c5ea3a..278203f 100644
--- a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
+++ b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="task"
-      id="terminal-sizes">
+      id="app-terminal-sizes">
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
 
@@ -24,21 +24,16 @@
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
 
-  <p>You can quickly change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the
+  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the
   following presets:</p>
-
-<!-- Use multiplication signs (×), not the letter X when talking about
-     dimensions. -->
-
-<!-- Give instructions in steps! -->
-
+  
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in these sizes, navigate to
+      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in these sizes, go to
       <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq></p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>choose from the options given in the menu.</p>
+      <p>Choose from the options given in the menu.</p>
       <list>
         <item>
           <p><gui>80×24</gui></p>
@@ -57,28 +52,29 @@
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-
-    <!-- "<gui>menu access keys</gui>" should be a link to the page that says
-    how to do this! -->
-
-    <p>If you have enabled <gui>menu access keys</gui>, you can access this
+    <p>If you have enabled <link xref="pref-keyboard-access"><gui>Menu access keys</gui></link>, you can 
access this
     menu by pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key><key>1</key></keyseq> to
     open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80x24</gui> and so on.</p>
   </note>
 
-<!-- Rewrite the following as proper <steps>: -->
+  <p>You can alter <app>Terminal</app> sizes according to your
+     requirements:</p>
 
-  <terms>
+  <steps>
     <item>
-      <title>Custom <app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
-     <p>You may want to preset <app>Terminal</app> dimensions according to your
-     requirements. Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
+       <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
      style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui><gui
-     style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>, select <gui>Use custom default terminal
-     size</gui>. You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by
+     style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+   </item>
+   <item>
+    <p>Select <gui>Use custom default terminal
+     size</gui>.</p>
+   </item>
+   <item>
+    <p>You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by
      clicking on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase size and <gui
      style="button">-</gui> to decrease.</p>
     </item>
-  </terms>
+  </steps>
 
 </page>


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