[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 93/320] help: review txt-hyperlinks.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit fd580aeef66e95b0c692f941dda3bf9cb9d9e44a
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 9 08:33:14 2013 +0000

    help: review txt-hyperlinks.page

 help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page |   30 +++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
index 83b4c20..5256593 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
@@ -11,31 +11,39 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
+
+<!-- You should always specify what type of browser you are talking about
+     because apart from web browsers, there are file browsers, photo browsers,
+     etc. -->
 
-    <desc>Open links in browser.</desc>
+    <desc>Open links in a web browser.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Hyperlinks</title>
 
-  <p>You may see hyperlinks (for example, http://gnome.org) in
-  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as apt-get,
+<!-- Don't use apt-get in the example as it is Ubuntu specific, the other two
+     examples are fine as they are not. Remember that apps need to be in <app>
+     tags! -->
+
+  <p>You may see hyperlinks (for example, http://www.gnome.org) in
+  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as
   wget or curl. You may want to open these links in your web browser. You can do
   the following actions on hyperlinks in <app>Terminal</app>:</p>
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Copy the hyperlink - To copy the hyperlink from <app>Terminal</app>,
+      <p>Copy the hyperlink: to copy the hyperlink from <app>Terminal</app>,
       right click and select <gui style="menuitem">Copy Link Address</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the hyperlink in your web browser - Right click on the hyperlink
-      and select <guiseq><gui style="menuitem">Open in
-      browser</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Open the hyperlink in your web browser: right click on the hyperlink
+      and select <gui style="menuitem">Open in browser</gui>.</p>
     </item>
-
-  <note style="tip"><p>Double click on the hyperlink selects the hyperlink. This
-  is useful when you want copy the hyperlink using keyboard
-  shortcuts.</p></note>
   </list>
 
 </page>