[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 314/346] Help: review pref-custom-shells

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 73b54f4b738abaac1b2271b958cf536e16de748d
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 06:57:18 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-custom-shells

 help/C/pref-custom-shells.page |   25 +++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-custom-shells.page b/help/C/pref-custom-shells.page
index dc1cc09..b874d5c 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-custom-shells.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-custom-shells.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="gs-execute-commands"/>
 
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -17,6 +17,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Set <app>Terminal</app> to run a command or a different shell on startup.</desc>
 
@@ -28,10 +33,10 @@
   operating system to run programs and view the contents of directories. The
   default shell is <app>Bash</app>.</p>
 
-  <p><app>Terminal</app> can be set to run a command, custom shell or the
-  default shell with additional parameters such a configuration file other than
-  the default. A shell is a type of program, so <app>Terminal</app> can also be
-  exclusively set to run standalone programs such as <code>ls</code>,
+  <p><app>Terminal</app> can be set to run a command, a custom shell or the
+  default shell with additional parameters, such as a configuration file other
+  than the default. A shell is a type of program, so <app>Terminal</app> can
+  also be exclusively set to run standalone programs such as <code>ls</code>,
   <code>top</code>, <code>iwconfig</code> and so on.</p>
   <!-- Don't use Latin! -->
 
@@ -53,15 +58,15 @@
       <p>In the text box, type the the command or the desired shell.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a new <app>Terminal</app> tab or window to see the custom shell
-      or command be executed.</p>
+      <p>Open a new <app>Terminal</app> tab or window to see how the custom
+      shell or command executes.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="important">
-    <p>You may have to enter full path to the command or the shell in case you
-    have not added the directory where the command or shell resides in the
-    <code>PATH</code> variable of your your system.</p>
+    <p>You may have to enter full path to the command or the shell if the
+    directory where the command or shell resides is not in the <code>PATH</code>
+    variable of your your system.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>You can also <link xref="gs-execute-commands">set the behaviour</link> of