[gnome-devel-docs] Cleanup to the Get started tour
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-devel-docs] Cleanup to the Get started tour
- Date: Wed, 19 Jun 2013 21:12:47 +0000 (UTC)
commit 4f62f55658abbdfd3341f701992f386c063d89e6
Author: Gordon Hill <caseyweederman gmail com>
Date: Wed Jun 19 21:56:08 2013 +0100
Cleanup to the Get started tour
new-platform-overview/tour-events.page | 2 +-
new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page | 4 ++--
new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page | 19 +++++++++----------
new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page | 10 +++++-----
new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page | 6 +-----
new-platform-overview/tour.page | 4 ++--
6 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
index 512470d..7e9940a 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
<p>Gtk has a set of predefined events that you can use in your application.</p>
<example>
<p>Declare <code>HelloWorld</code> as a new <code>Lang</code> class.
- <app>Gjs</app> requires classes to have the Name property defined.</p>
+ Gjs requires classes to have the Name property defined.</p>
<code><![CDATA[
const HelloWorld = new Lang.Class({
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
index 953f4b9..b9a1649 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
<example>
<p>Load the UI file using <code>GtkBuilder</code> and get the window object
- using the <gui>Name</gui> (or <gui>ID</gui>) chosen in <app>Glade</app>,
- and add the window object to the application:</p>
+ using the <gui>Name</gui> (or <gui>ID</gui>) chosen in Glade, and add the
+ window object to the application:</p>
<code><![CDATA[
_onStartup: function() {
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
index fcacede..f9fa870 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
@@ -29,16 +29,15 @@
<title>Get started with GNOME</title>
</links>
- <p>Gjs is a JavaScript binding for GNOME and can be
- used to interact with Gtk. Gtk is a toolkit for creating graphical
- user interfaces.</p>
- <p>Open a text editor and paste in the lines of code. The complete script is
- available in the <link xref="tour-summary">Summary</link>.</p>
- <p>Create an <code>object</code> using your <code>class</code> and call
- the <code>run()</code> method:</p>
-<example>
- <p>Call the Gjs JavaScript binding. This instructs the
- shell to run this script with Gjs.</p>
+ <p><link href="https://live.gnome.org/Gjs">Gjs</link> is a JavaScript binding
+ for GNOME and can be used to interact with Gtk. <link
+ href="http://www.gtk.org/">Gtk</link> is a toolkit for creating graphical user
+ interfaces.</p> <p>Open a text editor and paste in the lines of code. The
+ complete script is available in the <link
+ xref="tour-summary">Summary</link>.</p> <p>Create an <code>object</code> using
+ your <code>class</code> and call the <code>run()</code> method:</p> <example>
+ <p>Call the Gjs JavaScript binding. This instructs the shell to run this script
+ with Gjs.</p>
<code><![CDATA[
#!/usr/bin/gjs
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
index 36c7ff7..9af03a4 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
@@ -29,12 +29,12 @@
<title>Get started with GNOME</title>
</links>
- <p>Use <app>Glade</app>, the UI editor for GNOME to create a user interface.
- <app>Glade</app> produces XML files that describe attributes of an
- application.</p>
+ <p>Use <link href="http://glade.gnome.org/">Glade</link>, the UI editor
+ for GNOME to create a user interface. Glade produces XML files that describe
+ attributes of an application.</p>
- <p>When creating a UI file using <app>Glade</app>, the <gui>Name</gui> that you
- specify in <app>Glade</app> is the ID that you will need to use to get the
+ <p>When creating a UI file using Glade, the <gui>Name</gui> that you
+ specify in Glade is the ID that you will later need to use to get the
object from the UI file.</p>
<example>
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
index 19c9677..29fdefb 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
@@ -31,9 +31,5 @@
<p>Here is how the examples fit together:</p>
<code><include xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="tour-summary.js" parse="text"/></code>
- <p>For more information and tutorials about these technologies, visit their websites:</p>
- <p><link href="http://glade.gnome.org/">Glade</link></p>
- <p><link href="http://www.gtk.org/">Gtk</link></p>
- <p><link href="https://live.gnome.org/Gjs">Gjs</link></p>
- <links type="prevnext"/>
+
</page>
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour.page b/new-platform-overview/tour.page
index 28ecdc4..7834b00 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour.page
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@
</links>
<p>User interface (UI) can be constructed with code or created in
- <app>Glade</app>, the UI editor for GNOME. <app>Glade</app> produces XML
+ Glade, the UI editor for GNOME. Glade produces XML
files that describe attributes of an application.</p><p>You will generate a
- GtkBuilder file in <app>Glade</app> and access and display a window based on
+ GtkBuilder file in Glade and access and display a window based on
the contents of that file with a Gjs script. The script is examined in
multiple parts and included in full in the summary.</p>
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