[gnome-devel-docs] Cleanup to the Get started tour



commit 4f62f55658abbdfd3341f701992f386c063d89e6
Author: Gordon Hill <caseyweederman gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 19 21:56:08 2013 +0100

    Cleanup to the Get started tour

 new-platform-overview/tour-events.page     |    2 +-
 new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page |    4 ++--
 new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page        |   19 +++++++++----------
 new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page      |   10 +++++-----
 new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page    |    6 +-----
 new-platform-overview/tour.page            |    4 ++--
 6 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
index 512470d..7e9940a 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-events.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   <p>Gtk has a set of predefined events that you can use in your application.</p>
   <example>
     <p>Declare <code>HelloWorld</code> as a new <code>Lang</code> class.
-    <app>Gjs</app> requires classes to have the Name property defined.</p>
+    Gjs requires classes to have the Name property defined.</p>
 
     <code><![CDATA[
 const HelloWorld = new Lang.Class({
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
index 953f4b9..b9a1649 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-get_object.page
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
 
   <example>
     <p>Load the UI file using <code>GtkBuilder</code> and get the window object
-    using the <gui>Name</gui> (or <gui>ID</gui>) chosen in <app>Glade</app>,
-    and add the window object to the application:</p>
+    using the <gui>Name</gui> (or <gui>ID</gui>) chosen in Glade, and add the
+    window object to the application:</p>
 
     <code><![CDATA[
     _onStartup: function() {
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
index fcacede..f9fa870 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-gjs.page
@@ -29,16 +29,15 @@
     <title>Get started with GNOME</title>
   </links>
 
-  <p>Gjs is a JavaScript binding for GNOME and can be
-  used to interact with Gtk. Gtk is a toolkit for creating graphical
-  user interfaces.</p>
-  <p>Open a text editor and paste in the lines of code. The complete script is
-  available in the <link xref="tour-summary">Summary</link>.</p>
-  <p>Create an <code>object</code> using your <code>class</code> and call
-  the <code>run()</code> method:</p>
-<example>
-  <p>Call the Gjs JavaScript binding. This instructs the
-  shell to run this script with Gjs.</p>
+  <p><link href="https://live.gnome.org/Gjs";>Gjs</link> is a JavaScript binding
+  for GNOME and can be used to interact with Gtk. <link
+  href="http://www.gtk.org/";>Gtk</link> is a toolkit for creating graphical user
+  interfaces.</p> <p>Open a text editor and paste in the lines of code. The
+  complete script is available in the <link
+  xref="tour-summary">Summary</link>.</p> <p>Create an <code>object</code> using
+  your <code>class</code> and call the <code>run()</code> method:</p> <example>
+  <p>Call the Gjs JavaScript binding. This instructs the shell to run this script
+  with Gjs.</p>
 
   <code><![CDATA[
 #!/usr/bin/gjs
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
index 36c7ff7..9af03a4 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-glade.page
@@ -29,12 +29,12 @@
     <title>Get started with GNOME</title>
   </links>
 
-  <p>Use <app>Glade</app>, the UI editor for GNOME to create a user interface.
-  <app>Glade</app> produces XML files that describe attributes of an
-  application.</p>
+  <p>Use <link href="http://glade.gnome.org/";>Glade</link>, the UI editor
+  for GNOME to create a user interface. Glade produces XML files that describe
+  attributes of an application.</p>
 
-  <p>When creating a UI file using <app>Glade</app>, the <gui>Name</gui> that you
-  specify in <app>Glade</app> is the ID that you will need to use to get the
+  <p>When creating a UI file using Glade, the <gui>Name</gui> that you
+  specify in Glade is the ID that you will later need to use to get the
   object from the UI file.</p>
 
   <example>
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page b/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
index 19c9677..29fdefb 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour-summary.page
@@ -31,9 +31,5 @@
 
   <p>Here is how the examples fit together:</p>
   <code><include xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; href="tour-summary.js" parse="text"/></code>
-  <p>For more information and tutorials about these technologies, visit their websites:</p>
-  <p><link href="http://glade.gnome.org/";>Glade</link></p>
-  <p><link href="http://www.gtk.org/";>Gtk</link></p>
-  <p><link href="https://live.gnome.org/Gjs";>Gjs</link></p>
-  <links type="prevnext"/>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/tour.page b/new-platform-overview/tour.page
index 28ecdc4..7834b00 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/tour.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/tour.page
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@
   </links>
 
   <p>User interface (UI) can be constructed with code or created in
-  <app>Glade</app>, the UI editor for GNOME. <app>Glade</app> produces XML
+  Glade, the UI editor for GNOME. Glade produces XML
   files that describe attributes of an application.</p><p>You will generate a
-  GtkBuilder file in <app>Glade</app> and access and display a window based on
+  GtkBuilder file in Glade and access and display a window based on
   the contents of that file with a Gjs script. The script is examined in
   multiple parts and included in full in the summary.</p>
 


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