[gnome-mines] help: several miscellaneous fixes

[Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro src gnome org>]

commit 77f065a7f1a121003689dc1ddabf85b1a4759ed6
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mike catanzaro gmail com>
Date:   Sat Jun 1 11:45:55 2013 -0500

    help: several miscellaneous fixes

 help/C/bug-filing.page  |    4 ++--
 help/C/faces.page       |   14 +++++++-------
 help/C/get-help.page    |    4 ++--
 help/C/high-scores.page |    4 ++--
 help/C/index.page       |    2 +-
 help/C/rules.page       |    4 ++--
 help/C/translate.page   |    2 +-
 7 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/bug-filing.page b/help/C/bug-filing.page
index 96419a0..1d389b5 100644
--- a/help/C/bug-filing.page
+++ b/help/C/bug-filing.page
@@ -23,10 +23,10 @@
    <app>Mines</app> is maintained by a volunteer community. You are welcome to participate.  If you notice a 
problem you can file a <em>bug report</em>. To file a bug, go to <link href = "https://bugzilla.gnome.org/"/>.
    </p>
    <p>
-   This is a bug tracking system where users and developers can file details about bugs, crashes and request 
enhancements.
+   This is a bug tracking system where users and developers can file details about bugs and crashes, or 
request enhancements.
    </p>
    <p>
-   To participate you need an account which will give you the ability to gain access, file bugs, and make 
comments.  Also, you need to register so you can receive updates by e-mail about the status of your bug. If 
you don't already have an account, just click on the <gui>New Account</gui> link to create one.
+   To participate you need an account, which will give you the ability to gain access, file bugs, make 
comments, and receive updates by e-mail about the status of your bug. If you don't already have an account, 
just click on the <gui>New Account</gui> link to create one.
    </p>
 
   <p>Once you have an account, log in, click on <guiseq><gui>File a
diff --git a/help/C/faces.page b/help/C/faces.page
index d865038..b064aef 100644
--- a/help/C/faces.page
+++ b/help/C/faces.page
@@ -25,20 +25,20 @@
       <td><p>This is a new game and you have not clicked on any tile yet.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
-      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-sad.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>You have uncovered a mine, you lose.</p></td>
+      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-worried.svg"/></td>
+      <td><p>You are currently clicking on a tile.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
-      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-cool.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The tile you just clicked on is safe, you can continue.</p></td>
+      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-sad.svg"/></td>
+      <td><p>You have uncovered a mine. You lose.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
-      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-worried.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>You are clicking on a tile.</p></td>
+      <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-cool.svg"/></td>
+      <td><p>The tile you just clicked on is safe. You can continue.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-win.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>You have found all the mines, you win.</p></td>
+      <td><p>You have found all the mines. You win!</p></td>
     </tr>
   </table>
 
diff --git a/help/C/get-help.page b/help/C/get-help.page
index a0821ea..36e7e5b 100644
--- a/help/C/get-help.page
+++ b/help/C/get-help.page
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@
 
   <title>Hints and warnings</title>
 
-  <p>You can use hints to reveal safe tiles and flag warnings to help you keep
+  <p>You can use hints to reveal safe tiles, and flag warnings to help you keep
   track of flags.</p>
 
   <p>Click <gui style="button">Hint</gui> in the toolbar to reveal a hidden
-  tile that is safe. You will be penalised for using hints: ten seconds will be
+  tile that is safe. You will be penalized for using hints: ten seconds will be
   added to your total time.</p>
 
   <p>To enable warnings, edit the preferences by selecting
diff --git a/help/C/high-scores.page b/help/C/high-scores.page
index 167b9db..e471099 100644
--- a/help/C/high-scores.page
+++ b/help/C/high-scores.page
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
 
   <title>High scores</title>
 
-  <p>The scores lists the ten fastest times in which each type of mine field
-  has been cleared.</p>
+  <p>The high scores list the ten fastest times in which each type of mine
+  field has been cleared.</p>
 
   <p>To view the high scores, select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Mines</gui><gui
   style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>. The dialog will display the
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 57d7a1f..674638c 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title><media type="image" src="figures/logo32.png">GNOME Mines
-  logo</media>GNOME Mines</title>
+  logo</media> GNOME Mines</title>
   <p>
     <app>Mines</app> is a clone of the game Minesweeper. The aim is to locate
     all the mines that are hidden under tiles on a rectangular board. You will
diff --git a/help/C/rules.page b/help/C/rules.page
index bdcf99b..9ae881a 100644
--- a/help/C/rules.page
+++ b/help/C/rules.page
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
       selecting a custom board.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>The game begins with the board covered in tiles, click on any tile to
+      <p>The game begins with the board covered in tiles. Click on any tile to
       uncover it. You will reveal:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
          <p>A colored number, which represent the number of mines in the
          adjacent tiles. This will help you deduce where the mines are so that
-         you can mark them with <link xref="flags"/>.</p>
+         you can mark them with <link xref="flags">flags</link>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
          <p>A blank tile, which means there are no mines under any of the
diff --git a/help/C/translate.page b/help/C/translate.page
index 2d8e26d..f23ff95 100644
--- a/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/help/C/translate.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   The <app>GNOME games</app> user interface and documentation is being translated by a world-wide volunteer 
community.  You are welcome to participate.
 </p>
 <p>
- There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-games/";>many languages</link> for which 
translations are still needed.
+ There are <link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/module/gnome-mines/";>many languages</link> for which 
translations are still needed.
 </p>
 <p>
 To start translating you will need to <link href="http:l10n.gnome.org">create an account</link> and join the 
<link href="http://l10n.gnome.org/teams/";>translation team</link> for your language. This will give you the 
ability to upload new translations.