[seahorse/mallard-help] To review backup-keys.page

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit 7ee30b5aaae103cb069f7025732749f3a0317376
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jul 22 11:46:28 2013 -0400

    To review backup-keys.page
    
    Made minor edits to backup-keys.page to get it ready for review.

 help/C/backup-keys.page |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/backup-keys.page b/help/C/backup-keys.page
index c248e3e..1a0cbed 100644
--- a/help/C/backup-keys.page
+++ b/help/C/backup-keys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#misc"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-06-17" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2011-07-11" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-07-11" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@
 
   <p>It is always advisable to have a copy of your public keys, private keys
   and revocation certificates stored safely in an external memory device like a
-  USB. The device should then be kept locked or stored somewhere safe. This
-  way you will always have a copy of the key if your hard disk crashes or the
-  data on your computer is corrupted in some way and you can continue to unlock
-  your encrypted data with the external copy of the key.</p>
+  USB. The device should then be kept locked or stored somewhere safe. This way
+  you will always have a copy of the key if your hard disk crashes or if the
+  data on your computer is corrupted in some way, and you can continue to use
+  the external copy of the key.</p>
 
-  <note style="info">
+  <note style="tip">
     <p>Even if your public key has been
     <link xref="keys-publish">published</link>, save a copy of it because
     sometimes a <link xref="key-servers-what-are-they">key server</link> may be