[gnome-devel-docs/dx-hackfest] platform-overview: update the GIO Networking section

[Federico Mena Quintero <federico src gnome org>]

commit a4d4cd661fd3074d3c1d1f39b8180f8b6ad4aaeb
Author: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>
Date:   Thu Jan 31 17:37:22 2013 +0100

    platform-overview: update the GIO Networking section
    
    Signed-off-by: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>

 platform-overview/C/gio-network.page |   11 +++++------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/platform-overview/C/gio-network.page b/platform-overview/C/gio-network.page
index 7b22ba3..c03f556 100644
--- a/platform-overview/C/gio-network.page
+++ b/platform-overview/C/gio-network.page
@@ -9,12 +9,11 @@
 
 <title>GIO Networking</title>
 
-<p>Built on top of the stream APIs used for files, GIO provides
-high-level networking APIs to communicate over TCP/IP and UNIX
-domain sockets. You can use the GIO networking APIs to connect
-to a server, listen for events, and read resources. The
-asynchronous API designs means your application doesn't block
-waiting for a response.</p>
+<p>GIO Networking is built on top of the stream APIs <link xref="gio">used for
+files</link>.  It provides high-level APIs to communicate over TCP/IP and UNIX
+domain sockets. You can use the GIO networking APIs to connect to a server,
+listen for events, and read resources. The asynchronous API means your
+application doesn't block waiting for a response from the network.</p>
 
 <list style="compact">
   <item><p><link href="http://developer.gnome.org/gio/stable/";>GIO Reference Manual</link></p></item>