[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 50/55] docs: update to radio-stations-edit for clarity
- From: David King <davidk src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [rhythmbox/mallard-help: 50/55] docs: update to radio-stations-edit for clarity
- Date: Sun, 24 Feb 2013 21:10:21 +0000 (UTC)
commit 41cda2f079800304176569590e2b5a16cb4634e7
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date: Sat Dec 15 13:57:22 2012 -0600
docs: update to radio-stations-edit for clarity
help/C/radio-stations-edit.page | 13 ++++++++-----
1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page b/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
index df1b9e3..6d5c114 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
@@ -9,10 +9,15 @@
<desc>Add a new Internet radio station.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.2" date="2010-07-27" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.8" date="2012-12-15" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
</credit>
+ <credit type="author">
+ <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+ <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
<license>
<p>
Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0
@@ -23,11 +28,9 @@
<title>Edit a radio station</title>
<p>
- When you add a new Internet radio station, the title it assumes in the
- <gui>Radio</gui> library is its Internet address.
- </p>
- <p>
- To provide a more meaningful title:
+ When you add a new Internet radio station, <app>Rhythmbox</app> uses the
+ Internet address as the title of the station. To provide a more meaningful
+ title:
</p>
<steps>
<item>
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