[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 50/55] docs: update to radio-stations-edit for clarity



commit 41cda2f079800304176569590e2b5a16cb4634e7
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sat Dec 15 13:57:22 2012 -0600

    docs: update to radio-stations-edit for clarity

 help/C/radio-stations-edit.page |   13 ++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page b/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
index df1b9e3..6d5c114 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-edit.page
@@ -9,10 +9,15 @@
     <desc>Add a new Internet radio station.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.2" date="2010-07-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.8" date="2012-12-15" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <license>
       <p>
         Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0
@@ -23,11 +28,9 @@
   <title>Edit a radio station</title>
     
     <p>
-      When you add a new Internet radio station, the title it assumes in the
-      <gui>Radio</gui> library is its Internet address.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      To provide a more meaningful title:
+      When you add a new Internet radio station, <app>Rhythmbox</app> uses the 
+      Internet address as the title of the station. To provide a more meaningful
+      title:
     </p>
     <steps>
       <item>


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