[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 22/55] Various fixes

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 3263c145866994f18f43fc66476a75f94fff320f
Author: Milo Casagrande <milo ubuntu com>
Date:   Sun Jul 18 21:38:16 2010 +0200

    Various fixes

 help/C/playlists-automatic-create.page |    9 +++------
 help/C/playlists-automatic.page        |    6 ------
 help/C/playlists-standard-create.page  |    9 +++------
 help/C/prob-resolve-host.page          |   22 ++++++++++++++++++++++
 help/C/radio-stations-add.page         |    5 +++--
 help/C/radio-stations-listen.page      |    5 -----
 help/C/radio-stations.page             |    7 ++++++-
 7 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/playlists-automatic-create.page b/help/C/playlists-automatic-create.page
index c24e645..8efc556 100644
--- a/help/C/playlists-automatic-create.page
+++ b/help/C/playlists-automatic-create.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <desc>Create automatic playlists.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-06-24" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.2" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.3" date="2010-07-15" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -45,12 +46,8 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Select the desired playlist from <app>Rhythmbox</app> main window.
-      </p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>
-        Right-click on it, and choose <gui style="menuitem">Save to File</gui>.
+        Right-click on the playlist you would like to save, and 
+        choose <gui style="menuitem">Save to File</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/playlists-automatic.page b/help/C/playlists-automatic.page
index 04fe5f0..f5cea56 100644
--- a/help/C/playlists-automatic.page
+++ b/help/C/playlists-automatic.page
@@ -32,10 +32,4 @@
     add all the Blues music you add to your music collection.
   </p>
   
-  <!--
-  <media type="image" src="figures/rb-automatic-playlist.png" mime="image/png" style="center">
-    <p>Automatic palylists creation dialog</p>
-  </media>
-  -->
-
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/playlists-standard-create.page b/help/C/playlists-standard-create.page
index 98b113d..c071781 100644
--- a/help/C/playlists-standard-create.page
+++ b/help/C/playlists-standard-create.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <desc>Create standard playlists, add and remove songs.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-06-24" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.2" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.3" date="2010-07-15" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -97,12 +98,8 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Select the desired playlist from <app>Rhythmbox</app> main window.
-      </p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>
-        Right-click on it, and choose <gui style="menuitem">Save to File</gui>.
+        Right-click on the playlist you would like to save, and 
+        choose <gui style="menuitem">Save to File</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/prob-resolve-host.page b/help/C/prob-resolve-host.page
index 1062122..0a79203 100644
--- a/help/C/prob-resolve-host.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-resolve-host.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="radio-stations#common-problems"/>
     <desc>An error message which says "Cannot resolve hostname" appears.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.2" date="2010-07-15" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -22,4 +23,25 @@
     This kind of error can happen when you are not connected to the Internet, or
     to your local network.  
   </p>
+  <list>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        Try to reconnect to the Internet, or your local network, and repeat the actions
+        you were trying to perform.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        If you are using a cabled connection, check that your cable is correctly
+        attached to your computer, or to the device that provides your connection. 
+      </p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>
+        If you are using a wireless connection, check that the connection configuration
+        is correct, or that the wireless card is working correctly.
+      </p>
+    </item>
+  </list>
+  
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-add.page b/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
index 8f1bd3f..f49cb49 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
       
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="radio-stations" group="two"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="radio-stations-listen"/>
     <desc>Add a new Internet radio station.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -29,8 +30,8 @@
   
   <note>
     <p>
-      The radio station address is not the radio station website address. Usually
-      this address is provided as an <app>iTunes</app>, <app>Windows Media Player</app>,
+      Usually the radio station address is not the radio station website address.
+      That address should be provided as an <app>iTunes</app>, <app>Windows Media Player</app>,
       or <app>Winamp</app> address.
     </p>
   </note>
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
index bce7ce9..0ae882d 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
@@ -38,10 +38,5 @@
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
-    
-  <!--
-  Possible errors:
-   * Couldn't start playback - Playlist was empty
-  -->
   
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations.page b/help/C/radio-stations.page
index fa663f0..f22b969 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#rb-music" group="three"/>
     <desc>Listen and manage Internet radio stations.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.2" date="2010-07-15" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -22,7 +23,11 @@
   <title>Radio stations</title>
   
   <p>
-    <app>Rhythmbox</app> comes with various Internat radio station already configured.
+    <app>Rhythmbox</app> comes with various Internet radio station already configured.
+  </p>
+  <p>
+    You can find more Internet radio stations at this website: 
+    <link href="http://www.shoutcast.com";>www.shoutcast.com</link>
   </p>
   
   <section id="common-problems">