[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] Help: review pref-menubar

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 85da9b9d5101c10d510989cea885daff071a0602
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 05:19:36 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-menubar

 help/C/pref-menubar.page |    9 +++++++--
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-menubar.page b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
index a475020..f2aad07 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-menubar.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-menubar">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-21" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="adv-keyboards-access"/>
@@ -25,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <title>Menubar visibility</title>
 
-  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired, this may be useful if you
+  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired. This may be useful if you
   have limited screen space. To hide the menubar:</p>
 
   <steps>