[gnome-getting-started-docs] Update online.page

[Petr KovÃÅ <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit 1c330f8c4f70676536db03d3cd2218bb316940f8
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Thu Feb 7 19:18:30 2013 +0100

    Update online.page

 getting-started/C/online.page |   54 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 47 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/getting-started/C/online.page b/getting-started/C/online.page
index 5f7f073..94f4a7b 100644
--- a/getting-started/C/online.page
+++ b/getting-started/C/online.page
@@ -5,35 +5,75 @@
 
   <info>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jakub Steiner</name>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Petr Kovar</name>
+    </credit>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="videos"/>
     <title role="trail" type="link">Going online</title>
     <ui:thumb src="figures/online.png"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>Going Online</title>
-  <p>The status of your network connection is indicated in the top bar, next to your name/chat status.</p>
   
+  <note style="important">
+      <p>You can see the status of your network connection on the right-hand
+       side of the top bar, next to your name.</p>
+  </note>  
+
   <section id="going-online-wired">
-    <title>Wired Connections</title>
+
+    <title>Connecting to a Wired Network</title>
+
     <media type="image" src="go-online1.svg" width="100%" />
+
     <steps>
-      <item><p>The status icon on the top right corner indicates you are off-line.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Clicking on the icon may reveal the reason why. It may be that a wire is disconnected, the machine is in an <em>airplane mode</em> or there are no wireless networks available.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The network connection icon on the right-hand side of the top
+       bar shows that you are off-line.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the network connection icon to show more details about
+       the status of your network connection.</p>
+      <p>The off-line status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
+       example, a network cable has been unplugged, the computer has been set
+       to run in <em>airplane mode</em>, or there are no available wireless
+       networks in your area.</p></item>
     </steps>
 
     <media type="image" src="go-online2.svg" width="100%" />
+
     <steps style="continues">
-      <item><p>In case of a wired connection, simply connecting the ethernet cable should trigger automatic network configuration. This is indicated by the triple dot icon in the top bar.</p>
-      <p>Once the configuration succeeds, the status icon changes to the networked computer symbol.</p></item>
+      <item><p>If you want to use a wired connection, just plug in a network
+      cable to go online. The computer will try to set up the network
+      connection for you automatically.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item><p>While the computer sets up a network connection for you, the
+      network connection icon shows three dots.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Once the network connection has been successfully set up, the
+      network connection icon changes to the networked computer symbol.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
   </section>
+
   <section id="going-online-other">
-    <title>Other Types of Connections</title>
+
+    <title>Connecting to Other Types of Networks</title>
+
     <media type="image" src="go-online3.svg" width="100%" />
     
+    <steps>
+    <item><p>There are various types of network connections that you can use
+     with your computer, for example, mobile broadband, or wireless networks.
+     </p></item>
+    <item><p>Depending on your computer hardware and the networks availability,
+     you can choose other connection types by clicking the network connection
+     icon on the right-hand side of the top bar and selecting the network
+     connection you want to connect to.</p></item>
+     </steps>
+    
     <!-- FIXME: links to existing wireless/broadband connection documents. -->
     
   </section>
+
 </page>