[gnome-terminal/mallard-help: 7/69] Help: Modified help in accordance with last review commit.
- From: Sindhu S <sindhus src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-terminal/mallard-help: 7/69] Help: Modified help in accordance with last review commit.
- Date: Tue, 5 Feb 2013 16:45:25 +0000 (UTC)
commit 8b4f1ff3b6dc71c3a299f91dd1763d531bc717f9
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date: Wed Jan 9 15:20:11 2013 +0530
Help: Modified help in accordance with last review commit.
Made changes to name of the application, screenshot of the
application. Modified introductory text to be simpler in
explanation.
help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png | Bin 523950 -> 12172 bytes
help/C/introduction.page | 23 +++++------------------
2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png b/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png
index 2a9611f..6cba721 100644
Binary files a/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png and b/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index f9a7d24..6b4613f 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -17,33 +17,20 @@
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
- <desc>Introduction to GNOME <app>Terminal</app></desc>
+ <desc>Introduction to <app>Terminal</app></desc>
</info>
<title>Introduction</title>
-
-<!-- The application is called <app>Terminal</app> in the menu, so we should
- use that instead of 'GNOME Terminal'. -->
- <p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulator application that you can use to
- access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under the
- GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
-
- <p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a
- text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position
- and colors.</p>
-
-<!-- You are saying here that an emulator is emulating an emulator, which is a
- bit confusing. Improve the first sentence, maybe even merging it into the
- second one. -->
+ <p><app>Terminal</app> is a terminal emulator application to
+ access a UNIX shell environment and run programs available on your system.
+ <app>Terminal</app> emulates xterm which supports escape sequences
+ that control cursor position and colors.</p>
<table>
<tr>
<td>
<media type="image" src="figures/gnome-terminal.png" width="700">
-<!-- The screenshot should be only of the application itself, not the whole
- desktop. You can use the 'Take screenshot' application to automatically
- take a screenshot only of the selected window. -->
<p>Screenshot of GNOME <app>Terminal</app></p>
</media>
</td>
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