[gnome-devel-docs/dx-hackfest] platform-overview: Slight update to the Telepathy page

[Federico Mena Quintero <federico src gnome org>]

commit 1d98463880021fab6fd0babc5ca637a8e48d460d
Author: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>
Date:   Fri Feb 1 16:39:30 2013 +0100

    platform-overview: Slight update to the Telepathy page
    
    Signed-off-by: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>

 platform-overview/C/telepathy.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/platform-overview/C/telepathy.page b/platform-overview/C/telepathy.page
index 79c9278..3bc83ad 100644
--- a/platform-overview/C/telepathy.page
+++ b/platform-overview/C/telepathy.page
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@
 
 <p>Telepathy provides a powerful framework for interacting with the
 user's instant messaging contacts. With Telepathy, all accounts and
-connections are handled by a D-Bus session service that's deeply
+connections are handled by a <link xref="d-bus">D-Bus</link> session service that's deeply
 integrated into the GNOME desktop. Applications can tie into this
 service to communicate with contacts.</p>
 
 <p>With the Telepathy Tubes API, you can even tunnel an arbitrary
 protocol over modern instant messaging protocols like Jabber to
-create interactive applications. Create multi-player games or
+create interactive applications. You can create multi-player games or
 collaborative editors that integrate with the desktop-wide
 instant messaging services.</p>