[seahorse/mallard-help: 335/335] Reword misc-key-backup.page



commit ec41c48cbf1b70fd85e680146fa34827c91faf45
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sat Aug 24 14:30:33 2013 +0530

    Reword misc-key-backup.page

 help/C/misc-key-backup.page |   12 +++++-------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/misc-key-backup.page b/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
index 4b5f779..feac1bb 100644
--- a/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
+++ b/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
@@ -22,18 +22,16 @@
 
   <title>Securely back-up your keys</title>
 
-  <p>It is always advisable to have a copy of your public keys, private keys
-  and revocation certificates stored safely in an external memory device like a
-  USB. The device should then be kept locked or stored somewhere safe. This way
-  you will always have a copy of the key if your hard disk crashes or if the
-  data on your computer is corrupted in some way, and you can continue to use
-  the external copy of the key.</p>
+  <p>It is always advisable to have a copy of your public and private keys
+  safely stored in an external memory device like a USB. The device should then
+  be kept locked or stored somewhere safe. This way you will always have a copy
+  of the key if the data on your computer is corrupted in some way.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>Even if your public key has been
     <link xref="pgp-publish">published</link>, save a copy of it because
     sometimes a <link xref="about-key-servers">key server</link> may be
-    corrupted or may not be available.</p>
+    corrupted or may not be available.</p><!--Necessary? - Aruna?-->
   </note>
 
   <steps>


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