[seahorse/mallard-help: 269/335] To review passwords-keyring-change-default.page

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit 9dc96005ec5fd7a6b2c67e654cd9f7ba48ff531a
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jul 22 12:07:55 2013 -0400

    To review passwords-keyring-change-default.page
    
    Made minor edits to passwords-keyring-default.page to ge tit ready for review.

 help/C/passwords-keyring-change-default.page |    9 +++++----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/passwords-keyring-change-default.page b/help/C/passwords-keyring-change-default.page
index 6df3d6c..461e693 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-keyring-change-default.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-keyring-change-default.page
@@ -24,12 +24,13 @@
 
   <p>When you
   <link xref="passwords-stored-new-create">create a new stored password</link>,
-  it is stored in the <gui>Login</gui> keyring by default unless you choose
-  another keyring. You can make any other keyring the default choice in
-  <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
+  the default keyring is the first choice in the password creation dialog to
+  store the newly created password. Though the <gui>Login</gui> keyring is the
+  default choice in <app>Passwords and Keys</app>, you can make any other
+  keyring the default choice in <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To change the default keyring:</title>
+    <title>To change the default keyring choice:</title>
       <item>
        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
        <gui style="menuitem">By keyring</gui></guiseq>.</p>