[gnome-user-docs/wip/system-admin-guide: 34/38] policykid updated

[Jana Svarova <jsvarova src gnome org>]

commit ef105c4983d03dc88dc865654ff9bf7d9c17f747
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Tue Jul 9 15:01:10 2013 +0200

    policykid updated

 system-admin-guide/C/policy-kit.page |   21 +++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/policy-kit.page b/system-admin-guide/C/policy-kit.page
index 70a3696..9d95fc4 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/policy-kit.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/policy-kit.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic" style="task"
-      id="policy-kit">
+      id="policykit">
 
 <info>
  
   <revision version="0.1" date="2013-07-08" status="draft"/>
-  <link type="guide" xref="index" group="net" />
+  <link type="guide" xref="index" group="technologies" />
 
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -21,16 +21,13 @@
 <title>PolicyKit</title>
 
   <p><sys>PolicyKit</sys> is used for controlling system-wide privileges. It is
-  a framework, or an application-level toolkit, for centralizing the decision
-  making process that concerns granting access for non-privileged processes to
+  a framework, or an application-level toolkit, which centralizes the decision
+  making process, granting access for non-privileged processes to
   communicate with privileged ones.</p>
-  
-  <p>A user might prefer a different task in some situations and
-  <sys>PolicyKit</sys> is the tool which grants the user the right to perform
-  such a tasks. Among these are the situations when the user wishes to hibernate
-  and shutdown the computer, manage (Wireless) connections, mount/eject a
-  removable media, and so on.</p>
-  
-  <!--Explain how it works-->
+
+  <p>If a user wants to change the order of processes, for example wishes to
+  hibernate or shut down the computer, <sys>PolicyKit</sys> is the tool which
+  grants the user the right to perform such tasks. It does so by delimiting
+  distinct actions and delimiting users by group or by name.</p>
 
 </page>