[gnome-devel-docs/beginners] gtk-beginners page for Python partially rewritten.



commit d70f8c1a7240189b5f00da41fa9bfd46f6840116
Author: Marta Maria Casetti <mmcasetti gmail com>
Date:   Mon Aug 5 13:59:17 2013 +0200

    gtk-beginners page for Python partially rewritten.
    
    The language is more clear; the "how to run the code samples"
    reflects how in the new format of the pages the code sample is not
    the first thing you see; the reader is invited to modify and
    "play" with the code samples provided in the synopsis.

 beginners-docs/C/gtk-beginner.py.page |   13 +++++++------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/beginners-docs/C/gtk-beginner.py.page b/beginners-docs/C/gtk-beginner.py.page
index 5370ace..4aba203 100644
--- a/beginners-docs/C/gtk-beginner.py.page
+++ b/beginners-docs/C/gtk-beginner.py.page
@@ -32,16 +32,16 @@
 
 <synopsis>
  <p>This tutorial will teach you the basics of GUI programming using GTK+ in 
- Python. It will walk you through increasingly complex examples and programming 
- theory, but you can also feel free to just go directly to the section that is 
- most helpful to you.</p>
+ Python. It will walk you through increasingly complex widgets, with examples, 
+ and programming theory.</p>
+ <p>Try to modify each example to create your own version of the widget!</p>
 
  <p>If you have never programmed before, or are not familiar with the concepts 
  of object oriented programming, you may need to learn a few basics first.  The 
  book <link href="http://learnpythonthehardway.org/book/";>Learn Python the Hard 
  Way</link> or <link href="http://docs.python.org/tutorial/index.html";>The 
- Python Tutorial</link> may be a better place for you to start. Once you master 
- the basics, be sure to come back and check out these tutorials.</p>
+ Python Tutorial</link> could be a good place to start. Once you master 
+ the basics, come back and check out these tutorials.</p>
 </synopsis>
 
 <links type="section" />
@@ -49,7 +49,8 @@
 <note>
 <title>To run the code samples</title>
 
-  <p>To run the code samples in the tutorial:</p>
+  <p>In the pages of this tutorial we give some examples of different widgets 
+  and the code to reproduce these examples. To run the code:</p>
   <steps>
     <item><p>Type or copy and paste the code into a file, and save the file with 
     a name like <file><var>filename</var>.py</file></p></item>


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