[gnome-nibbles] help: Changes after review



commit 7cb01f7b45d9ed5ec51356bba70f495c071f74ec
Author: Aruna <aruna evam gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 13 22:36:58 2013 +0530

    help: Changes after review
    
    Added new screenshots to rel-movement.page.
    Removed screenshots from fake-bonus.page.
    Made changes to Makefile.am

 help/C/controls-change.page    |    2 +-
 help/C/fake-bonus.page         |   21 ----------------
 help/C/figures/after-fake.png  |  Bin 17645 -> 0 bytes
 help/C/figures/after-rel.png   |  Bin 17341 -> 18108 bytes
 help/C/figures/before-fake.png |  Bin 18001 -> 0 bytes
 help/C/figures/before-rel.png  |  Bin 19326 -> 17649 bytes
 help/C/figures/intro.png       |  Bin 75192 -> 0 bytes
 help/C/multi-player.page       |    2 +-
 help/C/rel-movement.page       |    6 +---
 help/Makefile.am               |   53 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 10 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 54 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/controls-change.page b/help/C/controls-change.page
index 251aa21..a61366b 100644
--- a/help/C/controls-change.page
+++ b/help/C/controls-change.page
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
       you want to change and repeat the process.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
-  
+
   <p>For example, to use <key>A</key> to <gui>Move Left</gui>, select the
   <gui>Left</gui> control line and click it, then press <key>A</key> on your
   keyboard when you see <gui>New accelerator…</gui> on the line.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/fake-bonus.page b/help/C/fake-bonus.page
index a711ff2..c943ef5 100644
--- a/help/C/fake-bonus.page
+++ b/help/C/fake-bonus.page
@@ -28,27 +28,6 @@
   points when your worm swallows them. They cause a reversal in the movement of
   your worm.</p>
 
-<!--
-  <table frame="all">
-    <title>What happens when the worm swallows a fake bonus</title>
-      <tr>
-        <td>
-          <figure>
-            <title>Before the worm swallows the bonus</title>
-            <media type="image" height="148" width="175" src="figures/before-fake.png"/>
-          </figure>
-        </td>
-        <td>
-          <figure>
-            <title>After the worm swallows the bonus</title>
-            <desc>The worm starts moving in the opposite direction.</desc>
-            <media type="image" height="148" width="175" src="figures/after-fake.png"/>
-          </figure>
-        </td>
-      </tr>
-    </table>
--->
-
   <p>To enable fake bonuses:</p>
   <steps>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/figures/after-rel.png b/help/C/figures/after-rel.png
index 6a7fca0..3631517 100644
Binary files a/help/C/figures/after-rel.png and b/help/C/figures/after-rel.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/figures/before-rel.png b/help/C/figures/before-rel.png
index 27c3ee1..9190580 100644
Binary files a/help/C/figures/before-rel.png and b/help/C/figures/before-rel.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/multi-player.page b/help/C/multi-player.page
index 4a50c5d..b45d91e 100644
--- a/help/C/multi-player.page
+++ b/help/C/multi-player.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
   <title>Multi-player games</title>
 
-  <p><app>Nibbles</app> can be played with up to six players. While a player
+  <p><app>Nibbles</app> can be played by up to six players. While a player
   controls <gui>Worm 1</gui> in a single-player game, players can additionally
   control <gui>Worm 2</gui> to <gui>Worm 6</gui> in a multi-player game. A
   two-player game allows you to control <gui>Worm 1</gui> and <gui>Worm
diff --git a/help/C/rel-movement.page b/help/C/rel-movement.page
index fc9ef13..10ec059 100644
--- a/help/C/rel-movement.page
+++ b/help/C/rel-movement.page
@@ -31,7 +31,6 @@
   Similarly, when the <key>Right</key> key is pressed, the worm turns right
   instead of moving towards the right of the screen.</p>
 
-<!--
   <table frame="all">
     <tr>
       <td>
@@ -43,8 +42,8 @@
       </td>
       <td>
         <figure>
-          <title>On pressing the <key>Right</key> key:</title>
-          <desc>The worm turns right and begins to move downwards.</desc>
+          <title>On pressing the <key>Left</key> key:</title>
+          <desc>The worm turns left and begins to move downwards.</desc>
           <media type="image" src="figures/after-rel.png"/>
         </figure>
       </td>
@@ -58,7 +57,6 @@
       </td>
     </tr>
   </table>
--->
 
   <p>To enable relative movement:</p>
 
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index 451ea72..c8fc4f1 100644
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -1,34 +1,33 @@
 @YELP_HELP_RULES@
 HELP_ID = gnome-nibbles
 
-HELP_MEDIA = \
-       figures/diamond.svg \
-       figures/snake-green.svg \
-       figures/snake-red.svg \
-       figures/snake-blue.svg \
-       figures/snake-grey.svg \
-       figures/snake-yellow.svg \
-       figures/snake-cyan.svg \
-       figures/snake-magenta.svg \
-       figures/before-rel.png \
-       figures/after-rel.png \
-       figures/before-fake.png \
-       figures/after-fake.png \
-       figures/life.svg \
-       figures/ice-cream.svg \
-       figures/donut.svg \
-       figures/cherry.svg
+HELP_MEDIA =   \
+       figures/after-rel.png   \
+       figures/before-rel.png  \
+       figures/cherry.svg      \
+       figures/diamond.svg     \
+       figures/donut.svg       \
+       figures/ice-cream.svg   \
+       figures/life.svg        \
+       figures/nibbles.png     \
+       figures/snake-blue.svg  \
+       figures/snake-cyan.svg  \
+       figures/snake-green.svg \
+       figures/snake-grey.svg  \
+       figures/snake-magenta.svg       \
+       figures/snake-red.svg   \
+       figures/snake-yellow.svg
 
-HELP_FILES = \
-       basics.page \
-       controls-change.page \
-       controls-default.page \
-       fake-bonus.page \
-       index.page \
-       multi-player.page \
-       preferences.page \
-       rel-movement.page \
-       scores.page \
+HELP_FILES =   \
+       basics.page     \
+       controls-change.page    \
+       controls-default.page   \
+       fake-bonus.page \
+       index.page      \
+       multi-player.page       \
+       preferences.page        \
+       rel-movement.page       \
+       scores.page     \
        legal.xml
 
 HELP_LINGUAS = ca cs de el en_GB es eu fr it oc sl sr sr latin sv zh_CN


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