[gnome-user-docs/wip/classic-mode] More updates for classic mode additions



commit 749c197ecd992be397cf37673ba0b2c428ae607b
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Mon Apr 15 19:27:01 2013 +0200

    More updates for classic mode additions

 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page     | 17 +++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page          |  5 ++++
 gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page | 43 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page   | 16 ++++++-------
 4 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index 598814f..6dffd9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -35,15 +35,16 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">You can start applications from the
   <gui>Applications</gui> menu at the top left of the screen, or you can use
   the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> by pressing the
-  <link xref="keyboard-key-super">Super key</link>.</p>
+  <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
-  <p>Move your mouse pointer to the <gui>Activities</gui> corner at the top
-  left of the screen to show the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>. This is where
-  you can find all of your applications. You can also open the overview by
-  pressing the <link xref="keyboard-key-super">Super key</link>.</p>
+  <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Move your mouse pointer to the
+  <gui>Activities</gui> corner at the top left of the screen to show the
+  <gui>Activities</gui> overview. This is where you can find all of your
+  applications. You can also open the overview by pressing the
+  <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
   <p>There are several ways of opening an application once you're in the
- activities overview:</p>
+  <gui>Activities</gui> overview:</p>
 
 <list>
 
@@ -55,8 +56,8 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
 
  <item>
   <p>Some applications have icons in the <em>dash</em>, the vertical strip of
- icons on the left-hand side of the activities overview. Click one of these to
- start the corresponding application.</p>
+ icons on the left-hand side of the <gui>Activities</gui> overview. Click one of
+ these to start the corresponding application.</p>
   <p>If you have applications that you use very frequently, you can
  <link xref="shell-apps-favorites">add them to the dash</link> yourself.</p>
  </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index 03af75a..69c8d60 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -56,6 +56,11 @@
   <p>The <gui>Log Out</gui> and <gui>Switch User</gui> entries only appear in
   the menu if you have more than one user account on your system.</p>
 </note>
+
+<note if:test="platform:gnome-classic">
+  <p>The <gui>Switch User</gui> entry only appears in the menu if you have more
+   than one user account on your system.</p>
+</note>
 </section>
 
 <section id="lock-screen">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
index 2471761..1419c87 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
@@ -52,15 +52,20 @@
 
 <title>The message tray</title>
 
-  <p>The message tray gives you a way to get back to your notifications when it
-  is convenient for you. It appears when you move your mouse to the bottom
-  right corner of the screen, or press
-  <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>. The
-  message tray contains all the notifications that you have not acted upon or
-  that permanently reside in it.</p>
-
-  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">You can also show the message tray by
-  clicking on the blue number icon at the right-hand side of the window list.</p>
+  <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">The message tray gives you a way to get
+  back to your notifications when it is convenient for you. It appears when you
+  move your mouse to the bottom right corner of the screen, or press <keyseq>
+  <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>. The message
+  tray contains all the notifications that you have not acted upon or that
+  permanently reside in it.</p>
+
+  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The message tray gives you a way to get
+  back to your notifications when it is convenient for you. It appears when you
+  press <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>.
+  You can also show the message tray by clicking on the blue number icon at the
+  right-hand side of the window list. The message tray contains all the
+  notifications that you have not acted upon or that permanently reside in it.
+  </p>
 
   <p>You can view the notifications by clicking on the message tray items. These
  are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
@@ -84,12 +89,20 @@
  switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
  <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
 
-  <p>When switched off, most notifications will not pop up at the bottom of the
-  screen. Very important notifications, such as when your battery is critically
-  low, will still pop up. Notifications will still be available in the
-  messaging tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom right
-  corner, or pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and they
-  will redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
+  <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">When switched off, most notifications
+  will not pop up at the bottom of the screen. Very important notifications,
+  such as when your battery is critically low, will still pop up. Notifications
+  will still be available in the messaging tray when you display it (by moving
+  your mouse to the bottom right corner, or pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key>
+  <key>M</key></keyseq>), and they will redisplay when you switch the toggle to
+  <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
+  
+  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">When switched off, most notifications
+  will not pop up at the bottom of the screen. Very important notifications,
+  such as when your battery is critically low, will still pop up. Notifications
+  will still be available in the messaging tray when you display it (by
+  pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and they will
+  redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
 
 </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 62674a9..cf9e185 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
  <item>
   <title>Activities overview</title>
   <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">The <em>activities overview</em> is the
-  screen that is displayed when you click on <gui>Activities</gui> at the top
+  screen that is displayed when you click <gui>Activities</gui> at the top
   left of the screen.</p>
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The <em>activities overview</em> is the
   screen that is displayed when you select <gui>Activities Overview</gui> in
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 
  <item if:test="platform:gnome-classic">
   <title>Main menu</title>
-  <p>The <em>main menu</em> is opened when you click on <gui>Applications</gui>
+  <p>The <em>main menu</em> is opened when you click <gui>Applications</gui>
   at the top left of the screen.</p>
  </item>
 
@@ -78,14 +78,14 @@
   screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone
   chatting with you sends a message, a notification will pop up to tell you. If
   you don't want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your
-  messaging tray. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner (or press
+  message tray. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner (or press
   <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>) to
-  see your messaging tray.</p>
+  see your message tray.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item if:test="platform:gnome-classic">
   <title>Places menu</title>
-  <p>The <em>places menu</em> is opened when you click on <gui>Places</gui>
+  <p>The <em>places menu</em> is opened when you click <gui>Places</gui>
   on the <gui>top bar</gui>. It gives you quick access to important folders,
   for example <gui>Downloads</gui> or <gui>Pictures</gui>.</p>
  </item>
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@
  <item>
   <title>Settings</title>
   <p>The <em>settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on,
- similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS.
- Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select
- <gui>Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
+  similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS.
+  Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>
+  to access them.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>


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