[four-in-a-row/user-help] Reviewed some help pages and marked final

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit b12f0c475434845ae6872dac63845bd66f086fe0
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Apr 14 19:29:33 2013 -0400

    Reviewed some help pages and marked final

 help/C/appearance.page       | 13 ++++++-------
 help/C/basics.page           |  2 +-
 help/C/controls-default.page |  2 +-
 help/C/index.page            |  2 +-
 help/C/make-easy.page        | 16 ++++++++--------
 help/C/scores.page           |  2 +-
 6 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/appearance.page b/help/C/appearance.page
index d062756..20275c6 100644
--- a/help/C/appearance.page
+++ b/help/C/appearance.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -20,20 +20,19 @@
   <title>Change the appearance of your gaming area</title>
 
   <p>By default, <app>Four-in-a-row</app> uses solid red and blue marbles
-  against a black grid when you start a new game. In order to use a different
-  theme:</p>
+  against a black grid when you start a new game.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To use a different theme:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Under <gui>Appearance</gui>, you will see
-      <gui style="group">Theme</gui>. Pick the theme of your choice from
-      the drop down menu present on the right of <gui>Theme</gui>. The change
-      will be reflected immediately in the game window.</p>
+      <p>Under <gui>Appearance</gui>, pick the theme of your choice from
+      the drop down menu to the right of <gui style="group">Theme</gui>. The
+      change will be reflected immediately in the game window.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/basics.page b/help/C/basics.page
index 4b2d408..a2ba228 100644
--- a/help/C/basics.page
+++ b/help/C/basics.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/help/C/controls-default.page b/help/C/controls-default.page
index f570645..37ee39d 100644
--- a/help/C/controls-default.page
+++ b/help/C/controls-default.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
     <link type="seealso" xref="controls-change"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 768af06..b6e4b0a 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
        id="index">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/help/C/make-easy.page b/help/C/make-easy.page
index dfea585..860717f 100644
--- a/help/C/make-easy.page
+++ b/help/C/make-easy.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
   a different square in the game area to change your move.</p>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>You can undo all your moves starting from your current move till you
-    reach a favourable state of the game or till the beginning of your current
-    game by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq>
+    <p>You can undo all your moves starting from your current move until you
+    reach a favourable state of the game, or until the beginning of your current
+    game, by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq>
     repeatedly.</p>
   </note>
 </section>
@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@
 <section id="hint">
   <title>Use hints</title>
 
-  <p>If you are not sure of your next move, you can use a hint. On using one,
-  your marble moves to the top of the column that is the best choice
-  strategy-wise and blinks. You can then drop your marble in that column. To
-  use a hint select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui>
+  <p>If you are not sure of your next move, you can use a hint. When you use a
+  hint, your marble moves to the top of the column that is the best choice,
+  strategy-wise, and blinks. You can then drop your marble into that column. To
+  use a hint, select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui>
   <gui style="menuitem">Hint</gui></guiseq> or press
   <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.</p>
 
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 3eca6d8..a9b40bf 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>