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[gnome-dictionary/wip/help-pages] Reviewed some of the help pages and marked final

commit 40c638e052d40aef60f0f35a737a0ce1a4e52b71
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Apr 13 16:50:13 2013 -0400

    Reviewed some of the help pages and marked final

 help/C/definition.page                 | 10 +++++-----
 help/C/dictionary-select.page          |  4 ++--
 help/C/index.page                      |  4 ++--
 help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page         | 11 +++++------
 help/C/print.page                      | 12 ++++++------
 help/C/prob-retrieving-definition.page |  4 ++--
 help/C/save-definition.page            |  4 ++--
 help/C/similar-words.page              |  9 +++++----
 help/C/sources-default.page            |  2 +-
 help/C/sources-delete.page             |  4 ++--
 help/C/sources-edit.page               |  2 +-
 help/C/sources-select.page             |  2 +-
 help/C/sources.page                    |  2 +-
 help/C/text-copy.page                  |  6 +++---
 14 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/definition.page b/help/C/definition.page
index 45bd35c..b3a319f 100644
--- a/help/C/definition.page
+++ b/help/C/definition.page
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
       id="definition">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="candidate"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#features" group="#first" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="similar-words"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources-select"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -29,16 +29,16 @@
   <p>You can use <app>Dictionary</app> to look up the meaning of a
   <em>term</em>. A term can be a single word such as <input>apple</input> or a
   compound word such as <input>chopping board</input>. The search result may
-  also show you the origin, importance and usage of a word. To look up a
-  term:</p>
+  also show you the origin, importance and usage of a word.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To look up a term:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Type in the term that you want to search for next to
       <gui>Look up</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <key>Return</key> or <gui style="button">Look up:</gui> to
+      <p>Press <key>Return</key> or click <gui style="button">Look up:</gui> to
       search.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/help/C/dictionary-select.page b/help/C/dictionary-select.page
index c8441fd..cf1735f 100644
--- a/help/C/dictionary-select.page
+++ b/help/C/dictionary-select.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="dictionary-select">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-04-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-04-06" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources-default"/>
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   dictionaries.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Select a dictionary</title>
+    <title>To select a dictionary:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Available Databases</gui></guiseq>. A sidebar
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 8fbdd17..3631106 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
     <media type="image" mime="image/png" its:translate="no" src="figures/gnome-dictionary-icon.png" /> 
Dictionary Help
   </title>
 
-  <section id="features" style="1column">
+  <section id="features" style="2column">
     <title>Features</title>
   </section>
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <title>Preferences</title>
   </section>
 
- <section id="troubleshooting" style="1column">
+ <section id="troubleshooting" style="2column">
     <title>Common problems and solutions</title>
   </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
index 4745ce4..ce70e54 100644
--- a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -1,10 +1,9 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:ui="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/ui/";
       type="task"
       id="keyboard-shortcuts">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -29,7 +28,7 @@
   <p>Keyboard shortcuts are combinations of keys that you can use instead of
   navigating through the menu. The following shortcuts are available:</p>
 
-  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom" ui:expanded="yes">
+  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom">
     <title>Navigate around <app>Dictionary</app></title>
     <thead>
       <tr>
@@ -61,7 +60,7 @@
     </tbody>
   </table>
 
-  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom" ui:expanded="yes">
+  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom">
     <title>Search shortcuts</title>
     <thead>
       <tr>
@@ -85,7 +84,7 @@
     </tbody>
   </table>
 
-  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom" ui:expanded="yes">
+  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom">
     <title>Navigate within a definition</title>
     <thead>
       <tr>
@@ -113,7 +112,7 @@
     </tbody>
   </table>
 
-  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom" ui:expanded="yes">
+  <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom">
     <title><app>Dictionary</app> definitions shortcuts:</title>
     <thead>
       <tr>
diff --git a/help/C/print.page b/help/C/print.page
index 52818a6..ca34966 100644
--- a/help/C/print.page
+++ b/help/C/print.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="print">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="definition"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="print-font"/>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 
   <title>Print a definition</title>
 
-  <p>You can print a definition to paper or a file. Before printing, you
+  <p>You can print a definition to paper or to a file. Before printing, you
   should preview the definition as it would be printed to check that the text
   fits onto the page, especially if you have changed the
   <link xref="print-font">print font</link> size.</p>
@@ -45,12 +45,12 @@
         exactly as it will be printed.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-       <p>Use the toolbar to browse pages, adjust zoom level and page
+       <p>Use the toolbar to browse pages, or adjust zoom level or page
        width.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Click the <gui style="button">Print this document</gui> to print
-        the definition or close the window to end the preview.</p>
+        the definition, or close the window to end the preview.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
@@ -76,12 +76,12 @@
         <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Select the printer that you want to use from the list of printers
+        <p>Select the printer that you want to use from the list of printers,
         or select
         <gui href="help:gnome-help/print-to-file">Print to File</gui>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Chose your <link href="help:gnome-help/printing#paper">printing
+        <p>Choose your <link href="help:gnome-help/printing#paper">printing
         settings</link>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
diff --git a/help/C/prob-retrieving-definition.page b/help/C/prob-retrieving-definition.page
index f077bd5..0aa5a71 100644
--- a/help/C/prob-retrieving-definition.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-retrieving-definition.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="prob-retrieving-definition">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-04-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-04-06" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#troubleshooting"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="definition"/>
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Cannot find definition</title>
+  <title>Cannot find a definition</title>
 
   <p>If you see the error message
   <sys>Error while retrieving definition</sys> when looking up a definition
diff --git a/help/C/save-definition.page b/help/C/save-definition.page
index a39cdc1..6150810 100644
--- a/help/C/save-definition.page
+++ b/help/C/save-definition.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="save-text">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Chose where you want to save the definition to and a name for the
-      file. You may want to add a <file>.txt</file> file extention to the end
+      file. You may want to add a <file>.txt</file> file extension to the end
       of the file name.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/similar-words.page b/help/C/similar-words.page
index abb3972..cdf1317 100644
--- a/help/C/similar-words.page
+++ b/help/C/similar-words.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="similar-words">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-28" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources"/>
 
@@ -24,12 +24,13 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Similar words</title>
+  <title>Display similar words</title>
 
-  <p><app>Dictionary</app> will only display the definition from one your
-  dictionaries. To check if there are search results in other dictionaries:</p>
+  <p><app>Dictionary</app> will only display the definition from one of your
+  dictionaries.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To check if there are search results in other dictionaries:</title>
     <item>
       <p><link xref="definition">Look up</link> the desired term.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/help/C/sources-default.page b/help/C/sources-default.page
index d489d38..57c61de 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-default.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-default.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources-default">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="complete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
diff --git a/help/C/sources-delete.page b/help/C/sources-delete.page
index e25b327..1a62385 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-delete.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-delete.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources-delete">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="complete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="prob-retrieving-definition"/>
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   working for you, you may want to delete it.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Delete a dictionary source:</title>
+    <title>To delete a dictionary source:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu"><app>Dictionary</app></gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
diff --git a/help/C/sources-edit.page b/help/C/sources-edit.page
index 3e51a20..56cd209 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-edit.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources-edit">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="complete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
diff --git a/help/C/sources-select.page b/help/C/sources-select.page
index 1f3aa0d..c803bc1 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-select.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-select.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources-select">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="complete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources-default"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="dictionary-select"/>
diff --git a/help/C/sources.page b/help/C/sources.page
index 1ee0c11..5f74921 100644
--- a/help/C/sources.page
+++ b/help/C/sources.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="complete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="definition"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="pref"/>
diff --git a/help/C/text-copy.page b/help/C/text-copy.page
index 7bee399..843eb80 100644
--- a/help/C/text-copy.page
+++ b/help/C/text-copy.page
@@ -24,13 +24,13 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Copy definition</title>
+  <title>Copy a definition</title>
 
   <p>You can copy and paste definitions from <app>Dictionary</app> to another
   application.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Copy a definition</title>
+    <title>To copy a definition:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select the text that you want to copy in <app>Dictionary</app>.
       Alternatively, you can select the whole definition using
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Paste the text into another application. This can usually be done
-      using the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>P</key></keyseq> keyboard shortcut
+      using the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>V</key></keyseq> keyboard shortcut
       or through one of the menus.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
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