[gnome-mines] Updated help/C/faces.page
- From: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-mines] Updated help/C/faces.page
- Date: Sat, 13 Apr 2013 15:14:52 +0000 (UTC)
commit 02bd3fa1674ed8361094824dcd3c55c7facdeb5a
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date: Sat Apr 13 20:41:29 2013 +0530
Updated help/C/faces.page
Corrected a few sentences.
help/C/faces.page | 14 +++++++++-----
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/faces.page b/help/C/faces.page
index 38ef6fe..160cc3c 100644
--- a/help/C/faces.page
+++ b/help/C/faces.page
@@ -11,6 +11,10 @@
<years>2011</years>
</credit>
+ <credit>
+ <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
+ <email>aruna evam gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
</info>
<title>The meaning of the faces</title>
@@ -18,23 +22,23 @@
<table shade="rows">
<tr>
<td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-smile.svg"/></td>
- <td><p>This is a new game and you didn't clicked on any tile for the moment.</p></td>
+ <td><p>This is a new game and you have not clicked on any tile yet.</p></td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-sad.svg"/></td>
- <td><p>You clicked on a mine, you loose.</p></td>
+ <td><p>You have uncovered a mine, you lose.</p></td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-cool.svg"/></td>
- <td><p>The tile you clicked on is safe. You can continue.</p></td>
+ <td><p>The tile you just clicked on is safe, you can continue.</p></td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-worried.svg"/></td>
- <td><p>This face appears when you're clicking a on tile.</p></td>
+ <td><p>You are clicking on a tile.</p></td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/face-win.svg"/></td>
- <td><p>You found all the mines, you win.</p></td>
+ <td><p>You have found all the mines, you win.</p></td>
</tr>
</table>
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