[gnome-dictionary/wip/help-pages: 19/19] Review dictionary-select.page

[Sindhu S <sindhus src gnome org>]

commit bb1baa36c9b81b705113c6c2704e9a4d8d0d1f25
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 30 22:25:51 2013 +0000

    Review dictionary-select.page

 help/C/dictionary-select.page |   44 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/dictionary-select.page b/help/C/dictionary-select.page
index b9d0bfe..6a4ca1c 100644
--- a/help/C/dictionary-select.page
+++ b/help/C/dictionary-select.page
@@ -3,48 +3,50 @@
       id="dictionary-select">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources-default"/>
-    <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail comm</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Select a dictionary</title>
+  <title>Select a different dictionary</title>
 
-  <p>A single dictionary source may have many dictionaries related to various
-  subjects and languages. You can search terms from any of these
+  <p>A single <link xref="sources">dictionary source</link> may have many
+  dictionaries different dictionaries. You can search any of these
   dictionaries.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To select a dictionary:</title>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui><gui style="menuitem">Available 
Databases</gui></guiseq>. The sidebar will pop up listing the
-      available dictionaries for your default set dictionary source.</p>
-    </item>
+    <title>Select a dictionary</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select and click the desired dictionary.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Available Databases</gui></guiseq>. A sidebar
+      listing the available dictionaries for your currently selected dictionary
+      source will open.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p><link xref="definition">Look up</link> the definition for the desired
-      term.</p>
+      <p>Click twice on the dictionary that you want to use.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="important">
-    <p>Unless you select another dictionary or open a new instance of
-    <app>Dictionary</app> or restart <app>Dictionary</app>, throughout the
-    current session of <app>Dictionary</app>, terms you search
-    will be looked up from the selected dictionary. By default in a new
-    instance, a term will searched from the first dictionary from the
-    <gui>Available Dictionaries</gui> list.</p>
+  <p>The next term that you <link xref="definition">look up</link> will show
+  the result only from the selected dictionary.</p>
+
+  <note>
+    <p>Your dictionary selection will not be remembered next time you use
+    <app>Dictionary</app>.</p>
   </note>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+
+</page>