[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Identify and don't assume that people reading this have knowledge of what GNOME is, so provide descr



commit c7ad1df12ed7966d0434314e55a0578b21a2ffcb
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Tue Sep 18 01:01:45 2012 +0200

    Identify and don't assume that people reading this have knowledge of what GNOME is, so provide description and links at the top (after IRC discussion)

 help/C/index.page |   50 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 28347b0..8bc429b 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -33,12 +33,35 @@
   <media type="image" src="figures/users-activities-overview.png"/>
 
   <p>
-    GNOME 3.6 is the latest update to GNOME 3. It delivers a number of major new features, 
+    GNOME 3.6 is the latest update to GNOME 3 and represents 6 months of work by the GNOME
+    Project. It delivers a number of major new features,
     including a reworked Activities Overview, updated Message Tray and notifications, an enhanced 
     Files application, as well as improved Accessibility support and integrated input sources for 
     using different languages. It also incorporates a host of smaller enhancements. Together, these 
     changes make GNOME 3 better than ever before.
   </p>
+  <p>
+    The GNOME Project is <link href="http://www.gnome.org/about/";>an international
+    community of contributors that is backed by a non-profit Foundation.
+    We focus on user experience, stability, first-class internationalization,
+    and accessibility. GNOME is Free Software and available to all. All our work
+    is free to use, modify and redistribute.
+  </p>
+
+  <comment>
+    <p>
+      Statistics need to be updated before the release, use e.g. ./get-git-stats 2012-04-18
+      from the releng module.
+    </p>
+  </comment>
+  <p>
+    Since the last version, &lastversion;, approximately &gitauthors; people made about &gitcommits; 
+    changes to GNOME. Anyone can get involved in GNOME to help us to improve our software. If you are 
+    interested in working on GNOME, you can <link href="http://www.gnome.org/get-involved/";>join us</link>.
+    You can also support us financially by becoming a <link href="http://www.gnome.org/friends/";>
+    Friend of GNOME</link>.
+  </p>
+
 
   <section id="users.core" style="2column">
     <title>What's New In Our Core User Interface</title>
@@ -94,27 +117,12 @@
     </figure>
 
     <p>
-      The GNOME Project is an international community of contributors that is backed 
-      by a non-profit Foundation. We focus on user experience, stability, first-class 
-      internationalization, and accessibility. GNOME is Free Software: all our work is 
-      free to use, modify and redistribute.
+      The GNOME Project is <link href="http://www.gnome.org/about/";>an international
+      community of contributors that is backed by a non-profit Foundation.
+      We focus on user experience, stability, first-class internationalization,
+      and accessibility. GNOME is Free Software and available to all. All our work
+      is free to use, modify and redistribute.
     </p>
-
-  <comment>
-    <p>
-      Statistics need to be updated before the release, use e.g. ./get-git-stats 2012-04-18
-      from the releng module.
-    </p>
-  </comment>
-  <p>
-    Since the last version, &lastversion;, approximately &gitauthors; people made about &gitcommits; 
-    changes to GNOME. Anyone can get involved in GNOME to help us to improve our software. If you are 
-    interested in working on GNOME, you can <link href="http://www.gnome.org/get-involved/";>join us</link>.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    You can also support us financially by becoming a <link href="http://www.gnome.org/friends/";>
-    Friend of GNOME</link>.
-  </p>
     <p>
       GNOME &gnomeversion; could not have been possible without the hard work and
       dedication of the <link href="http://www.gnome.org/foundation/membership/";>GNOME community</link>.



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