[release-notes/gnome-3-6] lock screen - minor tweaks

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit a95f43f0aebdf84d23fee38c78fe6badc923869b
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 23:49:02 2012 +0100

    lock screen - minor tweaks

 help/C/users-lock-screen.page |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
index 5f3e0a6..f2018f0 100644
--- a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
+++ b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
   ~/Pictures." />
 
   <p>
-    The lock screen is a major new feature for GNOME 3.6. It provides an attractive display 
-    while your computer is locked, as well as useful functionality such as the display of notifications
+    The lock screen is a major new feature for GNOME 3.6. It shows an attractive image on the screen  
+    while your computer is locked and also provides useful functionality, such as the display of notifications
     and the ability to control media playback.
   </p>
   <p>
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@
     disabled via the <gui>Brightness &amp; Lock</gui> section in <gui>System Settings</gui>.) It also means 
     that you can easily change the volume, skip a track or pause your music without having to enter a password.
   </p>
-  <comment>
-    <p>TODO: it would be good to have a screenshot of the login screen here.</p>
-  </comment>
+
+  <!-- TODO: it would be good to have a screenshot of the login screen here -->
+
   <p>
-    Login has also been addressed as a part of the lock screen feature. The result is a smoother and 
-    more satisfying experience when you log in or unlock your computer.
+    The login screen has also been updated for GNOME 3.6, and has a new visual style and other minor enhancemets.
+    Combined with the new lock scren, the result is a smoother experience when you log in or unlock your computer.
   </p>
 
   <note style="hint">