[release-notes/gnome-3-6] proofreading of users-* pages

[Jeremy Bicha <jbicha src gnome org>]

commit 13bad30c9185657463f3ed81b2cd96970d122b7d
Author: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 10:51:52 2012 -0400

    proofreading of users-* pages

 help/C/users-core.page            |    2 +-
 help/C/users-lock-screen.page     |    4 ++--
 help/C/users-message-tray.page    |    2 +-
 help/C/users-notifications.page   |    2 +-
 help/C/users-system-settings.page |    8 ++++----
 help/C/users-user-menu.page       |    4 ++--
 6 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-core.page b/help/C/users-core.page
index 4590d14..25c9d58 100644
--- a/help/C/users-core.page
+++ b/help/C/users-core.page
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
     <item><p>
       For people who like <link
       href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Easter_egg_%28media%29";>easter eggs</link>, we 
-      have added something fun. You'll need to be quick with their mouse: test to see if you can find it.
+      have added something fun. You'll need to be quick with your mouse: test to see if you can find it.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>
       The style of modal dialogs has been changed to better integrate with the rest of 
diff --git a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
index eff2f50..5f3e0a6 100644
--- a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
+++ b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <p>
     The lock screen is a major new feature for GNOME 3.6. It provides an attractive display 
-    while your computer is locked, as well as useful functionality, such as the display of notifications 
+    while your computer is locked, as well as useful functionality such as the display of notifications
     and the ability to control media playback.
   </p>
   <p>
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
   </comment>
   <p>
     Login has also been addressed as a part of the lock screen feature. The result is a smoother and 
-    more satisfying experience when you log into or unlock your computer.
+    more satisfying experience when you log in or unlock your computer.
   </p>
 
   <note style="hint">
diff --git a/help/C/users-message-tray.page b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
index fc58bd3..af8a6a8 100644
--- a/help/C/users-message-tray.page
+++ b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
   <note style="hint">
     <title>Keyboard shortcut</title>
     <p>For the first time, the message tray is also accessible with the keyboard.
-       Press <keyseq><key>windows</key><key>M</key></keyseq> to bring up the message tray.</p>
+       Press <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq> to bring up the message tray.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/users-notifications.page b/help/C/users-notifications.page
index b8d038c..06852e2 100644
--- a/help/C/users-notifications.page
+++ b/help/C/users-notifications.page
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   <section id="less-intrusive" style="2column">
     <title>Smarter</title>
     <p>
-      Notifications have got smarter for GNOME 3.6. If you're running a
+      Notifications are smarter in GNOME 3.6. If you're running a
       full screen application or game, we only show you your important
       notifications. All other notifications are delayed until you stop using
       your full screen application.
diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index 749df40..baba02e 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -73,12 +73,12 @@
       GNOME 3.6 includes a revamped <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> settings section. 
       The old settings panel was overhauled to provide a set of options that are much easier 
       to understand. It also features a pretty new test area which enables scrolling settings 
-      to be testing - something that was not possible previously.
+      to be tested - something that wasn't possible previously.
     </p>
     <p>
       If you use a touchpad, the new <gui>Content sticks to fingers</gui> setting allows 
-      you to drag content as if sliding a physical piece of paper. This feature is sometimes 
-      known as Natural Scrolling.
+      you to drag content as if sliding a physical piece of paper. This feature is also
+      known as Natural Scrolling or Reverse Scrolling.
     </p>
   </section>
 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
     <list>
       <item>
         <p>Facebook</p>
-        <p>Facebook was included in 3.4 but was not enabled.  You will now be able to chat with
+        <p>Facebook is now enabled by default.  You will now be able to chat with
            your Facebook friends through the Facebook account.</p>
       </item><item>
         <p>Microsoft Exchange</p>
diff --git a/help/C/users-user-menu.page b/help/C/users-user-menu.page
index 5258ff0..c209055 100644
--- a/help/C/users-user-menu.page
+++ b/help/C/users-user-menu.page
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
     The user menu has been refined for the latest GNOME release, making it more compact 
     and adding functionality that was missed by many users. After reviewing the performance 
     of this menu, and taking user feedback into account, the decision was made to introduce 
-    the <gui>Power Off</gui> item by default. Suspend is now accessible by pressing the 
-    <gui style="button">Alt</gui> key.
+    the <gui>Power Off</gui> item by default. You can suspend by pressing the
+    <gui style="button">Alt</gui> key in the user menu or by simply closing the lid on your laptop.
   </p>
 
   <p>