[release-notes/gnome-3-6] system settings - remove some of the gloss

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 16e025b0f633c97f4356e1aa727bda912ead6946
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 15:31:47 2012 +0100

    system settings - remove some of the gloss

 help/C/users-system-settings.page |   17 +++++++----------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index c92f7a3..749df40 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
     improvements to the main interface as well to individual settings panels.
   </p>
   <p>
-    The main <gui>System Settings</gui> interface has been dramatically improved. It 
+    The main <gui>System Settings</gui> interface has received a lot of attention. It 
     now includes larger icons and a better layout. All the icons are now displayed 
     whenever possible, without the need for scrolling, and the window size automatically 
     adjusts to compensate for small screens. Search results are also shown in a nicer way.
@@ -52,10 +52,8 @@
     </p>
     <p>
       We've also refreshed the default background in 3.6, and have updated the 
-      choice of alternative backgrounds to include some fantastic new images. 
-      Setting a single color as a background has also been improved. These now 
-      include a new set of colors which look even better thanks to the use of an 
-      overlaid texture.
+      choice of alternative backgrounds to include new images. Setting a single 
+      color as a background has also been improved and features a new set of colors.
     </p> <note style="tip">
       <title>Tip</title> <p>
         <app xref="users-files">Files</app> and the <app>Image Viewer</app> allow
@@ -72,11 +70,10 @@
 <!-- http://blogs.gnome.org/mclasen/2012/08/21/rounding-out-the-3-6-feature-list/ -->
 
     <p>
-      GNOME 3.6 includes a revamped <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> settings section. The old 
-      settings panel was overhauled to provide a set of options that are much easier 
-      to understand. It also features a new test area which, along with looking great, 
-      also enables scrolling settings to be testing - something that was not possible 
-      previously.
+      GNOME 3.6 includes a revamped <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> settings section. 
+      The old settings panel was overhauled to provide a set of options that are much easier 
+      to understand. It also features a pretty new test area which enables scrolling settings 
+      to be testing - something that was not possible previously.
     </p>
     <p>
       If you use a touchpad, the new <gui>Content sticks to fingers</gui> setting allows