[release-notes/gnome-3-6] system settings - clarify the part about enterprise login

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 419b4eab65ccb30fbe2daf417105e0605ad0af04
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 15:01:31 2012 +0100

    system settings - clarify the part about enterprise login

 help/C/users-system-settings.page |    5 ++---
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index 63e4c99..c92f7a3 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -154,9 +154,8 @@
     <p>
       A major new feature in GNOME 3.6 is the addition of Enterprise logins (also called Active 
       Directory or Kerberos logins). This allows GNOME to be used in centrally managed and 
-      corporate environments in a much more integrated manner. Users can enroll their computer 
-      with a corporate network, and administrators can deploy GNOME much more easily and 
-      effectively.
+      corporate environments in a much more integrated manner. Users can enroll their computer with 
+      an enterprise network, and use their enterprise username and password to log into GNOME.
      </p>
   </section>