[release-notes/gnome-3-6] activities overview - improve wording

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit b02ef5c3613c45ccf5d00c84ac27e2d86d830dcd
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 11:06:47 2012 +0100

    activities overview - improve wording

 help/C/users-activities-overview.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-activities-overview.page b/help/C/users-activities-overview.page
index c8f0a85..209a38b 100644
--- a/help/C/users-activities-overview.page
+++ b/help/C/users-activities-overview.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#users.core"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="users-message-tray" />
-    <desc>More prominent search entry; you can search for more things.</desc>
+    <desc>New applications button and improved layout.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Olav Vitters</name>
       <email its:translate="no">olav vitters nl</email>
@@ -22,6 +22,6 @@
   <media type="image" src="figures/users-activities-overview.png"/>
 
   <p>
-    The activities overview has received some attention this release with changes on how you access your applications.  Previously, you used the application tab at the top left to access your applications.  Instead, we now access them using the grid icon located on the dash to access your application.  This improves the layout of the overview and enables us to highlight the all-important search bar.
+    The Activities Overview has received plenty of attention this release. One change is the way that application launchers are reached. In previous versions, you used the application tab in the top-left to access your applications. This has been replaced with a new grid button that is located in the dash. This greatly improves the layout of the overview and highlights the all-important search bar.
   </p>
 </page>