[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Remove use of first person speech



commit 32fcd51ec3dc74aa84df1b0389de5fb0c33d4c64
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sun Sep 16 15:40:20 2012 +0200

    Remove use of first person speech

 help/C/users-files.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-files.page b/help/C/users-files.page
index c0e838f..68a405b 100644
--- a/help/C/users-files.page
+++ b/help/C/users-files.page
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@
      <title>Use case</title>
      <media type="image" src="figures/users-files-workflow-new-folder-selection.png"/> 
      <p>
-      I have a set of files I would like to collect, organize to be together.
-      Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> I could identify where I would like 
+      You have a set of files that you would like to collect and organize to be together.
+      Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> you could identify where you would like 
       this prospective collection to live, perform the action <gui>Create a New 
-      Folder</gui>, then go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> I
-      only have to select the files I want to organize and select the <gui>New 
+      Folder</gui>, then go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> you
+      only have to select the files that you want to organize and select the <gui>New 
       Folder with Selection</gui> action from the contextual menu. 
      </p>
     </note>



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