[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Remove use of first person speech
- From: Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-6] Remove use of first person speech
- Date: Sun, 16 Sep 2012 13:40:26 +0000 (UTC)
commit 32fcd51ec3dc74aa84df1b0389de5fb0c33d4c64
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date: Sun Sep 16 15:40:20 2012 +0200
Remove use of first person speech
help/C/users-files.page | 8 ++++----
1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-files.page b/help/C/users-files.page
index c0e838f..68a405b 100644
--- a/help/C/users-files.page
+++ b/help/C/users-files.page
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@
<title>Use case</title>
<media type="image" src="figures/users-files-workflow-new-folder-selection.png"/>
<p>
- I have a set of files I would like to collect, organize to be together.
- Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> I could identify where I would like
+ You have a set of files that you would like to collect and organize to be together.
+ Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> you could identify where you would like
this prospective collection to live, perform the action <gui>Create a New
- Folder</gui>, then go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> I
- only have to select the files I want to organize and select the <gui>New
+ Folder</gui>, then go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> you
+ only have to select the files that you want to organize and select the <gui>New
Folder with Selection</gui> action from the contextual menu.
</p>
</note>
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