[release-notes/gnome-3-6] user-files: consistency in the sections and small changes

[Juan Jose Marin Martinez <jjmarin src gnome org>]

commit 312b1c8ba1596057e2da99b9aba911cdda4826f9
Author: Juanjo MarÃn <juanj marin juntadeandalucia es>
Date:   Sat Sep 15 18:17:21 2012 +0200

    user-files: consistency in the sections and small changes

 help/C/users-files.page |   59 ++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/users-files.page b/help/C/users-files.page
index cc3a7a0..4865e93 100644
--- a/help/C/users-files.page
+++ b/help/C/users-files.page
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@
   <title>Files</title>
 
   <p>
-    Starting with GNOME 3.6, we've taken the <app>Nautilus</app> application and evolved
-    this into <app>Files</app>. In brief, we now provide a simple application
-    focussed on the following items:
+    Starting with GNOME 3.6, we've taken the <app>Nautilus</app> application and
+    evolved this into <app>Files</app>. In brief, we now provide a simple
+    application focussed on the following items:
   </p>
 
   <list>
@@ -52,12 +52,12 @@
     <title>Be Immediately Useful</title>
 
     <p>
-     The initial view of the application should present me with things I can
-     take immediate action on. Things that are likely relevant to what I am
-     doing or what I have been doing recently. Something that serves a reminding
-     function for things that I have yet to do. Something that helps me
-     establish context. Something that doesnât require me to do additional work
-     or navigation every single time it starts.
+     The initial view of the application should present to the users the things 
+     they can take immediate action on. Things that are likely relevant to what 
+     they are doing or what they have been doing recently. Something that serves 
+     a reminding function for things that they have yet to do. Something that 
+     helps them establish context. Something that doesnât require them to do 
+     additional work or navigation every single time it starts.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -85,34 +85,35 @@
   <section id="users-files-workflows">
     <title>Have Simpler and More Natural Workflows</title>
     <p>
-     <app>Files</app> presents to the user all the actions relevant to the context. 
-     Rather than require to proactively create the conditions needed for an action, 
-     users only have to select the desired action available in every situation.
+     <app>Files</app> presents to the user all the actions relevant to the 
+     context. Rather than require to proactively create the conditions needed 
+     for an action, users only have to select the desired action available in 
+     every situation.
     </p>
-
     <note style="advanced">
-      <title>Example</title>
-      <media type="image" src="figures/users-files-workflow-new-folder-selection.png"/>  
-      <p>
-	I have a set of files I would like to collect, organize to be together. 
-        Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> I could identify where I would like this 
-        prospective collection to live, perform the action create a New Folder, then 
-        go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> I only have to select 
-        the files I want to organize and select the "New Folder with Selection" 
-        action from the contextual menu.
-      </p>
+     <title>Use case</title>
+     <media type="image" style="floatend" 
+      src="figures/users-files-workflow-new-folder-selection.png"/> 
+     <p>
+      I have a set of files I would like to collect, organize to be together.
+      Previously, in <app>Nautilus</app> I could identify where I would like 
+      this prospective collection to live, perform the action create a <em>New 
+      Folder</em>, then go look for content to fill it. With <app>Files</app> I
+      only have to select the files I want to organize and select the <em>New 
+      Folder with Selection</em> action from the contextual menu. 
+     </p>
     </note>
-    
   </section>
 
   <section id="users-files-coherent">
     <title>Be More Coherent</title>
     <p>
-     Many small changes has been introduced to spread consistency all across the 
-     application. Common usage patterns has been identified and they are followed in 
-     every single aspect of <app>Files</app>. In this regard, a much improved and 
-     space efficient maximized window state, a more consistent menu layout and behavior, 
-     more consistent use of icons, and a more GNOME 3 style pathbar and toolbar.
+     Many small changes has been introduced to spread consistency all across 
+     the application. Common usage patterns has been identified and they are
+     followed in every single aspect of <app>Files</app>. In this regard, a 
+     much improved and space efficient maximized window state, a more consistent
+     menu layout and behavior, more consistent use of icons, and a more GNOME 3 
+     style pathbar and toolbar.
     </p>
   </section>