[gnome-user-docs] Update Suspend/Power Off in user menu. Fixes bug #683005



commit 6e9c4e61c87ff59283063178568985344a8c4d19
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Sep 15 17:14:33 2012 +0200

    Update Suspend/Power Off in user menu. Fixes bug #683005

 gnome-help/C/power-off.page  |   12 ++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page |   19 +++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-off.page b/gnome-help/C/power-off.page
index 88eeada..8f2baf6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-off.page
@@ -8,12 +8,16 @@
     <desc>By default, you can see only the <gui>Suspend</gui> option, but it is
     also possible to power off your computer.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-09-15" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Andre Klapper</name>
+      <email>ak-47 gmx net</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -33,10 +37,10 @@
     <p>Click your name on the top bar</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Hold down <key>Alt</key> and click <gui>Power Offâ</gui></p>
+    <p>Click <gui>Power Off</gui></p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>By default, only the <link xref="power-suspend"><gui>Suspend</gui></link> option is visible. You may want to power off your computer if you wish to move it and do not have a battery, if your battery low or does not hold charge well. A powered off computer also uses <link xref="power-batterylife">less energy</link> than one which is suspended.</p>
+<p>You may want to power off your computer if you wish to move it and do not have a battery, if your battery low or does not hold charge well. A powered off computer also uses <link xref="power-batterylife">less energy</link> than one which is suspended.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index acd4f10..564ccb1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -12,12 +12,16 @@
     and so on.</desc>
     <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-09-15" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Andre Klapper</name>
+      <email>ak-47 gmx net</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -75,7 +79,9 @@
  suspend.</p>
 
   <p>To suspend your computer manually, click your name on the top bar and
- select <gui>Suspend</gui>.</p>
+  hold down the <key>Alt</key> key. The <gui>Power Off</gui> option will
+  change to <gui>Suspend</gui>. Select <gui>Suspend</gui>.</p>
+
 </section>
 
 <section id="shutdown">
@@ -95,12 +101,5 @@
  If you are an administrative user, you may be asked for your password
  to power off.</p>
 
-<note style="tip">
-  <p>If you need to power off or restart quickly, you can do it without logging
- out. Click your name on the top bar, then hold down the <key>Alt</key> key. The
- <gui>Suspend</gui> option will change to <gui>Power Off</gui>. Select this to
- power off or restart.</p>
-</note>
-
 </section>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>



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