[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Shorten text a bit

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 7be4bf603d5af45ad213ea4b8ba6ff25c8856b1b
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Sep 15 14:41:30 2012 +0200

    Shorten text a bit

 help/C/users-lock-screen.page |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
index 6d59e16..3cae063 100644
--- a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
+++ b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>
-    This is a big change, and it is something that has been on the drawing board
+    This is something that has been on the drawing board
     for a while. The lock screen has a single primary aim: to provide useful
     functionality when the screen is locked. Right now, this means we:
   </p>
@@ -60,9 +60,8 @@
   <p>
     The new lock screen also accomplishes several secondary goals. It creates a
     much smoother and more satisfying login experience. Creating the lock
-    screen, we wanted to make something that feels nice to use, and which sets
-    the tone for your encounter with your device. To that end, weâve given the
-    lock screen a nice, tactile quality. The screen is designed to resemble a
+    screen, we made something that feels nice to use, and which sets
+    the tone for your encounter with your device. The screen is designed to resemble a
     curtain, or a shield, that is removed to reveal the login screen beneath.
     That suggestion of layering and physicality enhances the experience of using
     GNOME 3, and is a pattern that is being introduced in other places.