[gnome-user-docs] Edited documents-view



commit c5bbba06e73cb10915b77204815d2e40bfb6d6c1
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Sep 8 21:49:26 2012 -0400

    Edited documents-view

 gnome-help/C/documents-view.page |   26 ++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-view.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-view.page
index 0a04b3a..8fcecce 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-view.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-view.page
@@ -30,23 +30,17 @@
      - Add an account in Online Accounts (link to those topics)</p>
   </comment>
 
-   are displayed as thumbnails, and will open full-screen with a single click
-  <p>When you open <app>Documents</app>, all the documents you have in your
-    computer with different <link xref="documents-list">extensions</link>
-    automatically appears as thumbnails. These <em>local documents</em>
-    are presented as well as <em>online documents</em>.
-    Online documents are uploaded from different sources or providers like
-    <em>GoogleDocs</em>. This is possible if you have previously added an
-    <link xref="accounts-add">online account</link>.</p>
-  <p>To view documents stored/ shared locally or remote/GoogleDocs:</p>
-
-  <p>With <app>Documents</app>, you can read your documents full screen,
-  without the distracting of tools or menus other applications have.</p>
+  <p>When you open <app>Documents</app>, all of your documents -- those stored
+    locally as well as online -- are displayed as thumbnails. To view
+    documents the full width of the <app>Documents</app> window (or full-screen
+    if maximized):</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the <em>Check</em> button.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the thumbnail.</p></item>
   </steps>
-  <note style="tip"><p>Documents are ready for you to review, edit,
-    <link xref="printing">print</link> or
-    <link xref="documents-collection-send">share.</link></p></note>
+
+  <note style="tip"><p>In order for your <em>Google Docs</em> documents to appear,
+    it is necessary to configure Google as an
+    <link xref="accounts-add">online account</link></p>
+  </note>
 </page>



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