[gnome-user-docs] Documents pages re-indexed

From: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
To: commits-list gnome org
Cc:
Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Documents pages re-indexed
Date: Thu, 6 Sep 2012 23:19:35 +0000 (UTC)
commit 610d156fa87723ebedb30f716582a36864bc4526
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Thu Sep 6 19:16:53 2012 -0400

    Documents pages re-indexed

 gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page        |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/documents-collections.page            |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/documents-filter.page                 |   30 +++++++++++++++++
 gnome-help/C/documents-formats.page                |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/documents-previews.page               |   35 ++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/documents-print.page                  |   12 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/documents-search.page                 |    9 ++++-
 ...ents-select.page.stub => documents-select.page} |   13 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/documents-sort.page.stub              |    4 +-
 ...ocuments-tracer.page => documents-tracker.page} |   15 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/documents.page                        |   12 +------
 11 files changed, 92 insertions(+), 50 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
index 149ee07..221c5f4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-collection-send.page
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@
   <p>You can share your documents or
     <link xref="documents-collections">collections</link> by email, if you have
     previously <link xref="accounts-add">added an online account</link>.
-    To send documents to your family or friends from <app>Documents</app>:</p>
+    To send documents to someone from <app>Documents</app>:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Check</gui> button located in the right side.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the <gui>Check</gui> button to enter selection mode.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select the document(s) or collection(s) you want to share.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the <gui>Three arrows</gui> icon from the bottom menu bar.
     </p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-collections.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-collections.page
index be605f4..538b866 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-collections.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-collections.page
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="documents-collections">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="documents#collection" />
+    <link type="guide" xref="documents#print" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-filter.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-filter.page
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..d12259b
--- /dev/null
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-filter.page
@@ -0,0 +1,30 @@
+<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="documents-filter">
+  <info>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
+
+    <link type="guide" xref="documents#view"/>
+
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
+
+    <desc>Choose which documents to display.</desc>
+  </info>
+
+  <title>Filter documents</title>
+
+  <p>With <app>Documents</app>, you can read your documents full screen,
+  without the distracting of tools or menus other applications have.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>Click the <em>Check</em> button.</p></item>
+  </steps>
+  <note style="tip"><p>Documents are ready for you to review, edit,
+    <link xref="printing">print</link> or
+    <link xref="documents-collection-send">share.</link></p>
+  </note>
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-formats.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-formats.page
index 99ea412..8a69edf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-formats.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-formats.page
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
     the reader will be able to....</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p><app>Documents</app> supports PDF, DVI, XPS, PostScript and the formats
-   supported by <app>Evince</app>, <app>Microsoft Office</app>,
+  <p><app>Documents</app> displays PDF, DVI, XPS, PostScript and the formats
+   supported by <app>Document Viewer</app> (Evince), <app>Microsoft Office</app>,
    <app>LibreOffice</app> and <app>Google Docs</app>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-previews.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-previews.page
index 9bd03cb..676070e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-previews.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-previews.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="documents-previews">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="documents#question" />
 
@@ -11,12 +11,16 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>You can see the preview of files that are locally stored;
-    but not the remotely ones, yet.</desc>
+    <desc>You can only preview files stored locally.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Why aren't there previews for some files?</title>
+  <title>Why don't some files have previews?</title>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
@@ -24,18 +28,15 @@
     stored remotely</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Every time you open <app>Documents</app> you can see a preview thumbnail
-  in most of the documents.</p>
-  <p>The documents that presented the preview thumbnail, are stored locally.</p>
-  <p>You can not be able to see the preview thumbnail of others (or they are
-  presented in blank) because they are stored in a remote server like
-  <gui>Google Docs</gui>.</p>
-  <p>If you want to see the preview thumbnail of the documents that are stored
-  in remote servers, you may download them and then it will generate a thumbnail
-  because they are going to be stored locally in your computer.</p>
+  <p>When you open <app>Documents</app>, a preview thumbnail is displayed for
+  documents that are stored locally. Those stored on a remote server like
+  <gui>Google Docs</gui> show as missing (or blank) preview thumbnails.</p>
+  <p>If you download a <gui>Google Docs</gui> document to local storage, a
+  thumbnail will be generated.</p>
+  
   <note style="important">
-  <p>The content of the document from <gui>Google Docs</gui> is going to be
-  updated at the time you downloaded the document.</p><p>If you want to read an
-  edit it online as you were doing before, it is better to not download.</p>
+    <p>The local copy of a document downloaded from <gui>Google Docs</gui> will
+    lose its ability to be updated online. If you want to continue to edit it
+    online, it is better not to download it.</p>
   </note>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
index bec5aa2..8bcb63d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-print.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="documents-print">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="documents#print" />
 
@@ -11,9 +11,13 @@
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Print documents that are locally stored; but not the remotely stored ones, yet.
-    </desc>
+    <desc>Print documents that are stored locally.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Print a document</title>
@@ -38,4 +42,4 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-search.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-search.page
index ab47c34..71f82b7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-search.page
@@ -2,15 +2,20 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="documents-search">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="documents#sort"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="documents#view"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Find your documents by title, author or contents.</desc>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page.stub b/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
similarity index 76%
rename from gnome-help/C/documents-select.page.stub
rename to gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
index a55bbfa..e92fe9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page.stub
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-select.page
@@ -2,20 +2,25 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="documents-select">
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="documents#collection" />
+    <link type="guide" xref="documents#print" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
    <desc>Use selection mode to select more than one document or collection.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Selecting multiple documents</title>
+  <title>Selecting documents</title>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
@@ -33,4 +38,4 @@
     <item><p>Select the documents or collections you need.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-sort.page.stub b/gnome-help/C/documents-sort.page.stub
index d1935f3..9d83278 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-sort.page.stub
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-sort.page.stub
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="stub"/>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="documents#sort" />
+    <link type="guide" xref="documents#view" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
@@ -26,4 +26,4 @@
   are stored in you computer, are also sorted since the most recently used to
   the least recently used. </p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents-tracer.page b/gnome-help/C/documents-tracker.page
similarity index 71%
rename from gnome-help/C/documents-tracer.page
rename to gnome-help/C/documents-tracker.page
index 8273e84..674af43 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents-tracer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents-tracker.page
@@ -1,19 +1,24 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic" style="task"
-      id="documents-tracer">
+      id="documents-tracker">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-03-13" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="documents#question"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Either locally or remotely document does not appear.</desc>
+    <desc>Local or remote documents do not appear.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>My documents can not be seen</title>
+  <title>My documents cannot be seen</title>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-03-13" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
@@ -27,4 +32,4 @@
    and XDG folders (recursively), ensure that the files your create for the
    demo are in one of these paths.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents.page b/gnome-help/C/documents.page
index 0d59ed1..5f23e4b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents.page
@@ -38,19 +38,11 @@
    remotely using <em>Google Docs</em>.</p>
 
  <section id="view" style="2column">
-    <title>Views and Find</title>
- </section>
-
- <section id="sort" style="2column">
-    <title>Sort and Search</title>
+    <title>View, Sort and Search</title>
  </section>
 
  <section id="print" style="2column">
-    <title>Print and Send</title>
- </section>
-
- <section id="collection" style="2column">
-    <title>Collections</title>
+    <title>Organize, Print and Send</title>
  </section>
 
  <section id="question" style="2column">
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