[gnome-user-docs] Some updates and pages confirmed for 3.6.



commit e6f9caef1c627b6f94cda7c42587cbfde89af5af
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Oct 8 18:54:28 2012 -0400

    Some updates and pages confirmed for 3.6.

 gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page       |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page       |   26 +++++++++++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page            |   17 +++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page        |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page |    4 ++--
 5 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
index 500347c..7f4887d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-whydim"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="display-lock"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
     <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to make it
     more readable in bright light.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -60,4 +60,4 @@
   while. This only affects the display, and does not turn off your computer.
   You can adjust how long you have to be inactive with the <gui>Turn screen off
   when inactive for</gui> option.</p>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page b/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
index 68093e2..867074f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
@@ -12,8 +12,13 @@
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2012</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Eject or unmount a USB flash drive, CD, DVD, or other device.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -44,19 +49,26 @@
 
   <p>If any of the files on the device are open and in use by an application,
   you will not be able to safely remove the device. You will be prompted with a
-  window telling you that "the volume is busy," and listing all the open files
-  on the device. Once you close all the files on the device, the device
-  will automatically be safe to remove. At that time you can unplug or eject it.
-  </p>
+  window telling you <gui>Volume is busy</gui>. To safely remove the device:</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Cancel</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Close all the files on the device.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the eject icon to safely remove or eject the device.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Alternately, you can right-click the name of the device in the
+    sidebar and select <gui>Eject</gui>.</p></item>
+  </steps>
 
+<!--
   <p>If you can't close one of the files, for example if the application
   using the file is locked up, you can right-click the file in the
   <gui>Volume is busy</gui> window and select <gui>End Process</gui>.
   This will force the entire locked up application to close, which could close
   other files you have open with that application.</p>
+-->
 
-  <note style="warning"><p>You can also choose <gui>Unmount Anyway</gui> to
+  <note style="warning"><p>You can also choose <gui>Eject Anyway</gui> to
   remove the device without closing the files. This may cause errors in
   applications that have those files open.</p></note>
   </section>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
index c9ddb46..cd89e53 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-keyboard-shortcuts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.1" date="2012-03-30" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -193,18 +193,23 @@
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F10</key></keyseq> or
     <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8593;</key></keyseq></p></td>
-    <td><p><link xref="shell-windows-maximize">Maximize</link> a window, or
-    restore a maximized window to its original size.</p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="shell-windows-maximize">Maximize</link> a window. Press
+    <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F10</key></keyseq> again to restore a maximized
+    window to its original size.</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8592;</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p>Maximize a window vertically along the left side of the screen.
-    Press again to restore the window to its previous size.</p></td>
+    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press 
+    <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8594;</key></keyseq> to
+    switch sides.</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8594;</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p>Maximize a window vertically along the right side of the screen.
-    Press again to restore the window to its previous size.</p></td>
+    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press 
+    <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8592;</key></keyseq> to
+    switch sides.</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Space</key></keyseq></p></td>
@@ -212,4 +217,4 @@
   </tr>
 </table>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
index ae9fdee..9288c8a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   id="mouse-lefthanded">
 <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Reverse the left and right mouse buttons in the mouse settings.</desc>
 
@@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ mouse or touchpad to make it more comfortable for left-handed use.</p>
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Mouse</gui> tab.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select <gui>Left-handed</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Switch <gui>Primary button</gui> to <gui>Right</gui>.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <note><p>This setting will affect both your mouse and touchpad,
 as well as any other pointing device.</p></note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index 402e258..e8b0d24 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>
     How to check your mouse if it is not working.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -157,4 +157,4 @@
 </comment>
 </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>



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