[gnome-user-docs] nautilus-connect for review, assorted mouse settings updated



commit 752539f69a18857dd71cd90491245bcd4564155c
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Oct 6 17:34:00 2012 -0400

    nautilus-connect for review, assorted mouse settings updated

 gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page                  |    4 +-
 ...-pointer.page => a11y-locate-pointer.page.stub} |    0
 gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page                 |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page            |   16 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page                |   19 +++++---
 ...reshold.page => mouse-drag-threshold.page.stub} |    0
 gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page                |   22 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page                 |   49 +++++++++++++++-----
 8 files changed, 76 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
index f12f2a1..61451c5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -68,4 +68,4 @@ moves too much, however, the click will not happen.</p>
 <p>Adjust the <gui>Motion threshold</gui> setting to change how much the pointer
 can move and still be considered to be hovering.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page.stub
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page
rename to gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page.stub
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
index ca87898..18fda6e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -70,4 +70,4 @@ right-click.</p>
 </note>
 </if:choose>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
index 4605607..dbff277 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="mouse-mousekeys"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Turn the touchpad off while typing to prevent accidental clicks.</desc>
 
@@ -14,6 +14,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 </info>
 
@@ -27,10 +31,10 @@ work again a short time after your last key stroke.</p>
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
    <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Touchpad</gui>
-   tab. The <gui>Touchpad</gui> tab will only be available if your computer has a
-   touchpad.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select <gui>Disable touchpad while typing</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>In the <gui>Touchpad</gui> section, check
+   <gui>Disable while typing</gui>. The <gui>Touchpad</gui> section will only be
+   available if your computer has a touchpad.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
index c21fd0c..917b2dc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Control how quickly you need to press the mouse button
     a second time to double-click.</desc>
@@ -19,6 +19,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 </info>
 
@@ -31,11 +35,12 @@ pressing the mouse button quickly, you should increase the timeout.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Mouse</gui> tab.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Under <gui>Double-Click Timeout</gui>, adjust the <gui>Timeout</gui>
-  slider to a value you find comfortable. Use the smiley face under the slider
-  to test your settings. A single click will make it smile. A double-click will
-  give it an ear-to-ear grin.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Under <gui>General</gui>, adjust the <gui>Double-click</gui>
+  slider to a value you find comfortable.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click the <gui>Test Your Settings</gui> button to test. A single
+  click in the window will highlight the outer circle. A double-click will
+  highlight the inside circle.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>If your mouse double-clicks when you want it to single-click
@@ -48,4 +53,4 @@ different computer and see if it still has the same problem.
 <note><p>This setting will affect both your mouse and touchpad,
 as well as any other pointing device.</p></note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page.stub
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page
rename to gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page.stub
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
index 2ce59a6..2a40041 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="pointing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-25" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Change how quickly the pointer moves when you use
     your mouse or touchpad.</desc>
@@ -22,35 +22,39 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 </info>
 
 <title>Adjust speed of the mouse and touchpad</title>
 
 <p>If your pointer moves too fast or slow when you move your mouse
-or use your touchpad, you can adjust the pointer sensitivity and
-acceleration for these devices.</p>
+or use your touchpad, you can adjust the pointer speed for these devices.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
    <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Under <gui>Pointer Speed</gui>, adjust the <gui>Acceleration</gui>
-   and <gui>Sensitivity</gui> sliders until the pointer motion is comfortable
-   for you.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Adjust the <gui>Pointer Speed</gui> slider until the pointer motion
+   is comfortable for you.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
+<!--
 <p>Sensitivity is how much your pointer initially moves when you move your mouse.</p>
 
 <p>The farther you move your mouse, the faster and faster the pointer moves
 relative to your movement. This helps you get the pointer across the screen
 without lifting your hand, while still letting you point and click accurately.
 Acceleration controls this behavior.</p>
+-->
 
 <note style="tip">
-  <p>You can set the sensitivity and acceleration differently for your mouse
+  <p>You can set the pointer speed differently for your mouse
   and touchpad. Sometimes the most comfortable settings for one type of
   device aren't the most comfortable for another. Just set the sliders on
-  both the <gui>Mouse</gui> and <gui>Touchpad</gui> tabs.</p>
+  both the <gui>Mouse</gui> and <gui>Touchpad</gui> sections.</p>
 </note>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
index 516b275..16f81a9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#sharing"/>
 -->
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-03" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>View and edit files on another computer over FTP, SSH, Windows
     shares, or WebDAV.</desc>
@@ -45,11 +45,12 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   <title>Connect to a file server</title>
   <item><p>In the file manager, click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar and pick
   <gui>Connect to Server</gui> from the app menu.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Enter the address of the server, in the form of a URL. Details on
-  supported URLs are <link xref="#types">listed below</link>.</p>
+  <item><p>Enter the address of the server, in the form of a
+   <link xref="#urls">URL</link>. Details on supported URLs are
+   <link xref="#types">listed below</link>.</p>
   <note>
-    <p>If you have connected to the server before, the URL may still be
-    available in the history list.</p>
+    <p>If you have connected to the server before, you can click on it in the
+    <gui>Recent Servers</gui> list.</p>
   </note>
   </item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Connect</gui>. A new window will open showing you the
@@ -61,8 +62,22 @@ internet/network address.</p>
 
 <section id="urls">
  <title>Writing URLs</title>
-<p>A <em>URL</em>, or <em>uniform resource locator</em>, is a
- form of address that refers to a location or file on a network.</p>
+<p>A <em>URL</em>, or <em>uniform resource locator</em>, is a form of address
+ that refers to a location or file on a network. The address is formatted like this:</p>
+<terms>
+  <item><p><sys>scheme://servername.example.com/folder</sys></p></item>
+</terms>
+<p>The <em>scheme</em> specifies the protocol or type of server. The
+  <em>example.com</em> portion of the address is called the <em>domain name</em>.
+  If a user name is required, it is inserted before the server name:</p>
+<terms>
+  <item><p><sys>scheme://username servername example com/folder</sys></p></item>
+</terms>
+<p>Some schemes require the port number to be specified. Insert it after the domain name:</p>
+<terms>
+  <item><p><sys>scheme://servername.example.com:port/folder</sys></p></item>
+</terms>
+<p>Below are specific examples for the various server types that are supported.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="types">
@@ -84,7 +99,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   to members so they can securely upload files. SSH servers always
   require you to log in.</p>
   <p>A typical SSH URL looks like this:</p>
-     <p><sys>ssh://username hostname example com/folder</sys></p>
+  <terms>
+    <item><p><sys>ssh://username servername example com/folder</sys></p></item>
+  </terms>
 
   <comment><cite>shaunm</cite><p>We should have a topics on encryption
   keys, possibly rolling the seahorse help into gnome-help. Then link
@@ -101,7 +118,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   you to use FTP to upload or download files. FTP sites with logins
   will usually allow you to delete and upload files.</p>
   <p>A typical FTP URL looks like this:</p>
-     <p><sys>ftp://username ftp example com/path/</sys></p>
+  <terms>
+    <item><p><sys>ftp://username ftp example com/path/</sys></p></item>
+  </terms>
 </item>
 <item>
   <title>Public FTP</title>
@@ -110,7 +129,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   user name and password, and will usually not allow you to delete
   or upload files.</p>
   <p>A typical anonymous FTP URL looks like this:</p>
-     <p><sys>ftp://ftp.example.com/path/</sys></p>
+  <terms>
+    <item><p><sys>ftp://ftp.example.com/path/</sys></p></item>
+  </terms>
   <p>Some anonymous FTP sites require you to log in with a
   public user name and password, or with a public user name using
   your email address as the password. For these servers, use the
@@ -125,7 +146,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   the right permissions on the remote computer, you can connect to a Windows
   share from the file manager.</p>
   <p>A typical Windows share URL looks like this:</p>
-    <p><sys>smb://servername/Share</sys></p>
+  <terms>
+    <item><p><sys>smb://servername/Share</sys></p></item>
+  </terms>
 </item>
 <item>
   <title>WebDAV and Secure WebDAV</title>
@@ -135,7 +158,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   this option. Secure WebDAV uses strong SSL encryption, so that other users
   can't see your password.</p>
   <p>A typical WebDAV URL looks like this:</p>
-    <p><sys>http://example.hostname.com/path</sys></p>
+  <terms>
+    <item><p><sys>http://example.hostname.com/path</sys></p></item>
+  </terms>
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
     <p>Also used by gnome-user-share, but we're not talking about that



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