[gnome-user-docs] nautilus-connect: begin section on URLs

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit fafd40fb1f7537c3a2acbaa78eccdb9391e59590
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Wed Oct 3 05:47:10 2012 -0400

    nautilus-connect: begin section on URLs

 gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page |   18 +++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
index c561283..516b275 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#sharing"/>
 -->
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-09-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-03" status="incomplete"/>
 
     <desc>View and edit files on another computer over FTP, SSH, Windows
     shares, or WebDAV.</desc>
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   <title>Connect to a file server</title>
   <item><p>In the file manager, click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar and pick
   <gui>Connect to Server</gui> from the app menu.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Enter the URL of the server. Details on supported URLs are
-  <link xref="#types">listed below</link>.</p>
+  <item><p>Enter the address of the server, in the form of a URL. Details on
+  supported URLs are <link xref="#types">listed below</link>.</p>
   <note>
     <p>If you have connected to the server before, the URL may still be
     available in the history list.</p>
@@ -59,8 +59,14 @@ internet/network address.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
+<section id="urls">
+ <title>Writing URLs</title>
+<p>A <em>URL</em>, or <em>uniform resource locator</em>, is a
+ form of address that refers to a location or file on a network.</p>
+</section>
+
 <section id="types">
- <title>Different types of servers</title>
+ <title>Types of servers</title>
 
 <p>You can connect to different types of servers. Some servers are public,
    and allow anybody to connect. Other servers require you to log in with a
@@ -68,11 +74,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
 <p>You may not have permissions to perform certain actions on files on a server.
   For example, on public FTP sites, you will probably not be able to delete
   files.</p>
-<p>The kind of URL you have to enter depends on the protocol that the
+<p>The URL you enter depends on the protocol that the
   server uses to export its file shares.</p>
-
 <terms>
-<title>Types of servers</title>
 <item>
   <title>SSH</title>
   <p>If you have a <em>secure shell</em> account on a server, you