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[gnome-user-docs] Screenshot updates and assorted small edits

commit 70ed59b64078e5f13116203cf6cb6c1054d3fbdb
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Nov 3 16:53:58 2012 -0400

    Screenshot updates and assorted small edits

 gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/figures/notification-buttons.png |  Bin 46717 -> 29628 bytes
 gnome-help/C/figures/shell-apps-open.png      |  Bin 56748 -> 59445 bytes
 gnome-help/C/figures/shell.png                |  Bin 34526 -> 51136 bytes
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page                |    7 +++--
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page                |   12 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page      |   30 +++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page    |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page         |   10 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page           |   20 ++++++++++++++--
 10 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
index 705d396..2ab2a62 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     policy then a red warning triangle will be shown in the
     <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui><gui>Color</gui></guiseq> dialog
     next to the profile.
-    A warning notifications will also be shown every time you log into
+    A warning notification will also be shown every time you log into
     your computer.
   </p>
   <p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/notification-buttons.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/notification-buttons.png
index 5953a16..0a0898a 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/notification-buttons.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/notification-buttons.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-apps-open.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-apps-open.png
index 836ff5d..2066973 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-apps-open.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-apps-open.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell.png
index 49841d1..d0cc162 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
index 8c69500..9fab064 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-nav.page
@@ -155,7 +155,8 @@
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq></p></td>
-    <td><p><link xref="shell-notifications#messagingtray">Open the message tray.</link></p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="shell-notifications#messagingtray">Open the message tray.</link>
+     Press <key>Esc</key> to close.</p></td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
@@ -197,14 +198,14 @@
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8592;</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p>Maximize a window vertically along the left side of the screen.
-    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press 
+    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press
     <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8594;</key></keyseq> to
     switch sides.</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8594;</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p>Maximize a window vertically along the right side of the screen.
-    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press 
+    Press again to restore the window to its previous size. Press
     <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>&#8592;</key></keyseq> to
     switch sides.</p></td>
   </tr>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
index 19c695b..ce803f1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-11-03" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jeremy Bicha</name>
@@ -15,6 +15,10 @@
        <name>Julita Inca</name>
        <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <desc>
      Use an on-screen keyboard to enter text by clicking buttons with the mouse.
     </desc>
@@ -42,7 +46,7 @@
   <p>If the screen keyboard gets in your way, click the button that looks like a
   keyboard (next to the <gui>tray</gui> button) to hide the keyboard. To make
   the keyboard show again, open the
-  <link xref="shell-notifications">messaging tray</link> by moving your mouse
-  to the bottom right of the screen and click the keyboard tray item.</p>
+  <link xref="shell-notifications">messaging tray</link> (by moving your mouse
+  to the bottom right of the screen), and click the keyboard tray item.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
index 3a3f8b9..eb7db10 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-keyboard-shortcuts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-11-03" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -43,14 +43,13 @@
     <item><p>Open <gui>Keyboard</gui> and select the <gui>Shortcuts</gui> tab.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select a category on the left side of the window, and the desired
-      action on the right.</p>
+      <p>Select a category in the left pane, and the row for the desired action
+      on the right. The current shortcut definition will change to
+      <gui>New accelerator...</gui></p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the current shortcut definition on the far right.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Hold down the desired key combination or press <key>Backspace</key> to clear.</p>
+      <p>Hold down the desired key combination, or press <key>Backspace</key> to
+      clear.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -399,21 +398,20 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Custom Shortcuts</gui> on the left side of the window.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button. The <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui>
-      window will appear.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Custom Shortcuts</gui> in the left pane, and click the
+      <key>+</key> button (or click the <key>+</key> button in any category).
+      The <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> window will appear.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Write a <gui>Name</gui> to identify the shortcut, and a
+      <p>Type a <gui>Name</gui> to identify the shortcut, and a
       <gui>Command</gui> to run an application, then click <gui>Apply</gui>.
       For example, if you wanted the shortcut to open Rhythmbox, you could name
       it <input>Music</input> and use the <input>rhythmbox</input> command.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Double click where it says <gui>Disabled</gui> on the far right, and
-      then hold down the desired shortcut key combination.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Disabled</gui> in the row that was just added. When it
+      changes to <gui>New accelerator...</gui>, hold down the desired shortcut
+      key combination.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
  <p>The command name that you type should be a valid system command. You
@@ -426,4 +424,4 @@
  <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> window will appear, and you can edit the command.</p>
 </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
index cc0fb93..8f65118 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -91,7 +91,8 @@ information on navigating user interfaces with only the keyboard.</p>
   </tr>
   <tr xml:id="super-m">
     <td><p><keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq></p></td>
-    <td><p><link xref="shell-notifications#messagingtray">Open the message tray.</link></p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="shell-notifications#messagingtray">Open the message tray.</link>
+     Press <key>Esc</key> to close.</p></td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
index 5ba0363..eae0b56 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
   <p>Other notifications have selectable option buttons. To close one of these
  notifications without selecting one of its options, click anywhere on the
- notification.</p>
+ notification, or click the close button.</p>
 
 <media type="image" width="500" src="figures/notification-buttons.png"/>
 
@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@
  are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
  given special treatment, and are represented by the individual contacts who sent
  you the chat messages.</p>
-  <p>The message tray is always visible in the activities overview.</p>
+  <p>You can close the message tray by pressing <key>Esc</key> (unless you are
+ in the activities overview, where it is always visible).</p>
 
   <note style="tip"><p>If the <link xref="keyboard-osk">screen keyboard</link>
    is open, you'll need to click the <gui>tray button</gui> to show the message
@@ -77,8 +78,9 @@
   <p>When switched off, most notifications will not pop up at the bottom of the
  screen. Very important notifications, such as when your battery is critically
  low, will still pop up. Notifications will still be available in the messaging
- tray when you move your mouse to the bottom right corner, and they will be
- shown to you when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
+ tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom right corner, or
+ pressing <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>),
+ and they will redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
 
 </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 0545c46..04fe677 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -7,12 +7,16 @@
 
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-11-03" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -50,12 +54,22 @@
  </item>
 
  <item>
+  <title>Lock screen</title>
+  <p>The <em>lock screen</em> displays an image on the screen while your
+ computer is locked. It provides useful information about what has been
+ happening while you have been away, and allows you to control media playback
+ without having to unlock.</p>
+ </item>
+
+ <item>
   <title>Notifications</title>
   <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop up at the bottom of the screen,
  telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting
  with you sends a message, a notification will pop up to tell you. If you don't
  want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your messaging tray. Move
- your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your messaging tray.</p>
+ your mouse to the bottom-right corner (or press
+ <keyseq><key xref="windows-key">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>) to see your
+ messaging tray.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
@@ -87,4 +101,4 @@
 
 </terms>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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