[gnome-devel-docs] tutorials JavaScript: Minor edits to the 'Beginner's tutorials and samples' page



commit 82cc5c62b54fb1df63b4ea60ff3438b2b73c745e
Author: Taryn Fox <jewelfox fursona net>
Date:   Tue May 22 21:52:16 2012 -0400

    tutorials JavaScript: Minor edits to the 'Beginner's tutorials and samples' page

 platform-demos/C/beginner.js.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/platform-demos/C/beginner.js.page b/platform-demos/C/beginner.js.page
index 94c1ea9..84af607 100644
--- a/platform-demos/C/beginner.js.page
+++ b/platform-demos/C/beginner.js.page
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>0 Beginner's Tutorials and samples</title>
-  <p>In these tutorials and samples we use JavaScript and GTK+. These tutorials and samples expect you to be familiar with the syntax of JavaScript, if not, read <link href="http://eloquentjavascript.net/contents.html";>Eloquent JavaScript</link> or your preferred guide to JavaScript. </p>
+  <p>In these tutorials and samples we use JavaScript and GTK+. These tutorials and samples expect you to be familiar with the syntax of JavaScript. If you're not, read <link href="http://eloquentjavascript.net/contents.html";>Eloquent JavaScript</link> or another guide, to learn how to write JavaScript code. </p>
 
 <section id="tutorials">
 <title>Tutorials</title>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
   </p>
   <steps>
     <item><p>Copy and paste the code into <var>filename</var>.js</p></item>
-    <item><p>In the terminal type:</p>
+    <item><p>In the terminal, type:</p>
           <screen>gjs <var>filename</var>.js</screen></item>
   </steps>
 



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