[cheese] Updated introduction help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 332f71183431d2982189fffbdf707a948abc9d8f
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Wed May 9 12:25:34 2012 -0700

    Updated introduction help page

 help/C/introduction.page |   28 ++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 66e898e..d36b98c 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -6,38 +6,34 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
     <revision version="3.0" date="2011-08-24" status="candidate"/>
     <revision version="3.1" date="2011-09-05" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="3.6" date="2012-05-09" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
       <email>yrazes gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
-    <credit type="editor">
+    <credit type="author editor">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Introduction to the <app>Cheese Webcam Booth</app>.</desc>
+    <desc>Introduction to the <app>Cheese</app> webcam application.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Cheese</app> is a fun webcam booth application which lets you take
-  photos and record videos using your webcam. By using <app>Cheese</app>, you
-  can make funny, original photos and videos that you can easily share with
-  others. It can take multiple photos in quick succession (using the
-  <link xref="burst-mode"><gui>Burst mode</gui></link>) and lets you
-  <link xref="apply-effects">apply effects</link> that add a special, fancy or
-  funny touch to your photos and videos.</p>
+  <p><app>Cheese</app> is a webcam application that lets you take photos and
+  record videos using your webcam. You can take multiple photos in quick
+  succession using the <link xref="burst-mode"><gui>Burst</gui> mode</link> and
+  apply <link xref="apply-effects">special <gui>Effects</gui></link> to add a
+  personal touch to them.</p>
 
-  <p>By default, <app>Cheese</app> starts in <gui>Photo mode</gui>, ready to
+  <p>By default, <app>Cheese</app> starts in <gui>Photo</gui> mode, ready to
   <link xref="take-photo">take a photo</link>. You need to switch to
-  <gui>Video mode</gui> to <link xref="record-video">record a video</link> or
-  switch to <gui>Burst mode</gui> to <link xref="burst-mode">take multiple
-  photos at once</link>.</p>
+  <gui>Video</gui> mode to <link xref="record-video">record a video</link>.</p>
 
-  <p><app>Cheese</app> works with most webcams, but if your particular make and
-  model does not seem to work properly, see <link xref="webcams">Webcams</link>
-  for advice on getting it to work.</p>
+  <p><app>Cheese</app> works with most webcams, but some older webcams may not
+  be supported.</p>
 
 </page>