[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [a11y] bikeshed

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 063f2b18ace5a84699e71ae763fd888b79336f6e
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 21 12:49:49 2012 +0000

    [a11y] bikeshed

 help/C/rna11y.xml |    9 ++++-----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index cc7b50d..d9ebdac 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -23,11 +23,10 @@
   <sect2 id="rna11y.orca">
     <title>Improved Orca Integration</title>
     <para>
-      The first stage of integrating the <application>Orca</application> screen reader into the 
-      GNOME 3 user experience has been completed this cycle. This means that screen reader users 
-      can now use GNOME 3 as their computing environment. These facilities will be further 
-      developed in future releases, and we encourage <application>Orca</application> users 
-      to provide feedback.
+      GNOME 3 support for screen readers has been improved. This means that users of the 
+      <application>Orca</application> screen reader can now use GNOME 3 as their computing 
+      environment. This integration will be further developed in future releases, and we 
+      encourage <application>Orca</application> users to provide feedback.
     </para>
     <para>
       <application>Orca</application>'s performance has also been greatly improved this release.