[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [a11y] make the orca section more human readable

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 99c895f9aaa6aa4366b9d05328d9d5f4e7e071db
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 21 11:06:07 2012 +0000

    [a11y] make the orca section more human readable

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   19 +++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 41b0b5a..55494ce 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <sect1 id="rna11y">
  <title>What's New in Accessibility</title>
    <para>
-    GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most accessible version of GNOME to date, with
+    GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most accessible version of GNOME 3 to date, with
     an emphasis on being reliable and usable for everyone. GNOME has started a 
     <ulink url="www.gnome.org/friends">Friends of GNOME fundraising campaign</ulink> 
     in order to strengthen its commitment to accessibility with more resources 
@@ -20,15 +20,18 @@
     These include:
   </para>
 
-
   <sect2 id="rna11y.orca">
-    <title>Improved Orca Integration</title>
+    <title>Orca Integration</title>
+    <para>
+      The <application>Orca</application> screen reader has now been fully integrated with
+      the GNOME 3 user experience. This means that screen reader users can now take advantage 
+      of GNOME 3 and use it as their computing environment. These facilities will be further 
+      developed in future releases, and we encourage <application>Orca</application> users 
+      to provide feedback.
+    </para>
     <para>
- The interaction of the screen reader <application>Orca</application> with
- <application>GNOME Shell</application> has been thoroughly reviewed and
- many improvements has been made, especially with respect to performance, 
- accessible names, roles, and states. We encourage <application>Orca</application>
- users to provide feedback.
+      <application>Orca</application>'s performance has also been greatly improved this release. 
+      These improvements mean that the new version is much faster and more responsive.
     </para>
   </sect2>