[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [a11y] wording of the orca integration with gnome shell and a typo.

[Juan Jose Marin Martinez <jjmarin src gnome org>]

commit c089c723f9f1698219c2889dfb1bfcd490acf831
Author: Juanjo MarÃn <juanj marin juntadeandalucia es>
Date:   Tue Mar 20 22:51:41 2012 +0100

    [a11y] wording of the orca integration with gnome shell and a typo.

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   11 +++--------
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 3326d4e..10727e5 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -24,11 +24,7 @@
   <sect2 id="rna11y.orca">
     <title>Improved Orca Integration</title>
     <para>
-     The interaction of the screen reader <application>Orca</application> with 
-     <application>GNOME Shell</application> has been thoroughly reviewed and 
-     many improvements has been made, especially with respect to accessible 
-     names, roles, and states. We encourage <application>Orca</application> 
-     users to provide feedback.
+     For this release we conducted a thorough review of the accessibility of <application>GNOME Shell</application> with <application>Orca</application>. Many accessibility improvements were made in GNOME Shell especially with respect to accessible names, roles, and states. Additional enhancements were made to <application>Orca</application> to ensure the access it provides is not only reliable but more performant. We think you will find <application>GNOME Shell</application> now works quite nicely with <application>Orca</application> and encourage you to give <application>GNOME Shell</application> a try and let us know what you think.
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -43,8 +39,7 @@
     <para>
       The high contrast theme has received several improvements this cycle. GNOME's new 
       and refreshed interface components are now supported by high-contrast mode. The 
-      high contrast icons that are used in this mode have also been improved and extended, 
-      making high contrast look better and cover more of GNOME.
+      high contrast icons that are used in this mode have also been improved and extended, making high contrast look better and cover more of GNOME.
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -63,7 +58,7 @@
       New settings for configuring the zoom (or magnifier) feature have been added for 
       this release. The new zoom options allow you to change the magnification factor, 
       the mouse tracking, the position of the magnified view on the screen and enable 
-      crosshairs to be added to hely you find the mouse or touchpad pointer.
+      crosshairs to be added to help you find the mouse or touchpad pointer.
     </para>
     </sect2>