[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [a11y] update and use sub-sections

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 2e5a9889423574ddb073410d3b1ea2e6be77c092
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 20 18:41:47 2012 +0000

    [a11y] update and use sub-sections

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   63 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------
 1 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 5eb125f..662dcf4 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -9,19 +9,20 @@
 <sect1 id="rna11y">
  <title>What's New in Accessibility</title>
    <para>
-    GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most beautiful accessible desktop to date, with
+    GNOME &gnomeversion; is the most accessible version of GNOME to date, with
     an emphasis on being reliable and usable for everyone. GNOME has started a 
     <ulink url="www.gnome.org/friends">Friend of GNOME fundraising campaign</ulink> 
     in order to strengthen its commitment to accessibility with more resources 
-    and make 2012 the year of accessibility.
+    and make 2012 the Year of Accessibility for GNOME.
   </para>
   <para>
-    For this release, we present the following features:
-   </para>
+    This release includes some significant enhancements to GNOME's accessibility features. 
+    These include:
+  </para>
 
-<itemizedlist>
 
-    <listitem>
+  <sect2 id="rna11y.orca">
+    <title>Improved Orca Integration</title>
     <para>
      The interaction of the screen reader <application>Orca</application> with 
      <application>GNOME Shell</application> has been thoroughly reviewed and 
@@ -29,44 +30,42 @@
      names, roles, and states. We encourage <application>Orca</application> 
      users to provide feedback.
     </para>
-    </listitem>
+  </sect2>
 
-    <listitem>
-    <para>
-    The Symbolic icon set has been re-themed and extended to produce an improved 
-    High Contrast experience for users. Support for the new widgets such as spin 
-    buttons and inline toolbars has been added.
-    </para>
+  <sect2 id="rna11y.high-contrast">
+    <title>Better High Contrast Mode</title>
     <figure id="fig.a11y.highContrast">
-        <!-- TRANSLATORS: To enable this, turn on high contrast in the accessibility
-        menu
-        -->
-        <title>Some of our New High Contrast Icons</title>
-        <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
-          <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rna11y-high-contrast.png" format="PNG"/>
-        </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
-      </figure>
-      </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
+      <title>New High Contrast Icons</title>
+      <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+        <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rna11y-high-contrast.png" format="PNG"/>
+      </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+    </figure>
     <para>
-	  This release includes a new Universal Access Control Center dialog for 
-    modifying magnifier user preferences. The new "Zoom Options" dialog allows 
-    users to configure the magnification factor, the mouse tracking, the 
-    position of the magnified view on screen and enabling the crosshairs to 
-    help users find the mouse pointer.
+      The high contrast theme has received several improvements this cycle. GNOME's new 
+      and refreshed interface components are now supported by high-contrast mode. The 
+      high contrast icons that are used in this mode have also been improved and extended, 
+      making high contrast look better and cover more of GNOME.
     </para>
+  </sect2>
+
+  <sect2 id="rna11y.zoom-settings">
+    <title>Configure the Zoom to Suit You</title>
     <figure id="fig.a11y.zoom">
         <!-- TRANSLATORS: To check this dialog, go to the universal access settings
         and press the options button in the seing tab.
         -->
-        <title>The new zoom options dialog</title>
+        <title>New Zoom Settings</title>
         <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
           <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rna11y-zoom-dialog.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
-      </listitem>
+    <para>
+      New settings for configuring the zoom (or magnifier) feature have been added for 
+      this release. The new zoom options allow you to change the magnification factor, 
+      the mouse tracking, the position of the magnified view on the screen and enable 
+      crosshairs to be added to hely you find the mouse or touchpad pointer.
+    </para>
+    </sect2>
 
-</itemizedlist>
 </sect1>
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